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So, the story itself is not bad, but the author gives MC powers that are not explained how he get them. Basically everything is done with time skips without any context whatsoever. The grammar is horrible, like rly garbage. Author rly does not care, cause even the first few chapters are not fixed. If you are looking for literature masterpiece go somewhere else. If you have nothing else to read go for it. So basically this fan-fic has more plotholes than switz-cheese.

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Rating may change again. Author decides to nerf the MC and i understand he is “weakened” but he was completely outclassed it was pathetic. also the author just adding batman randomly? Even if it wasnt batman the guy embarassed the mc because he got nerfed and you read “Batman” quotes and all maybe 30times in that chapter. Just a few chapters ruined this fanfic. Hate when authors nerf MCs

Amazing fanfiction plz more 😁😁😁😁😁😀😀💯💯💯💯more I hope you can continue this fanfiction.

ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi

The grammar is atrocious, nothing makes sense, everything's jumbled. Oh, and the writing style is horrible.👎exactly 140 characters. Noice!!

All your books in the MCU are really good.

Keep up the good work man . Read many fan-fictions but this is the most well put together story so far . Please keep going, you are doing a banging job . 👍🏽

well fleshed out, good time spent reading. Just hope to whatever deity you may or may not worship to, please no harem. I hate how decent fanfics create a harem and somehow those females with strong unique qualities and history (depending on which source you favor comics, tv, movies, etc) are butchered into sheep-like characters the are okay sharing. All in all keep up the good work.

Man this story is great, its good to read another decent MCU fanfic, i like how there is no bull**** system, wishes, cringy death intro and meeting some god, and finally no fucking harem where the mc focus more on getting more pussy rather than on the plot

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See that picture....its dope right...stories even more fly...MC is a one man army, like the dude did some **** similar to king Bradly from FMA...............[ atleast thats how I imagined it] the story is in marvel during steves era, and so far MC is a beast....stories built well, character development is dope [though writer seems to have a habit of making characters disappear...not kill them, just fade out....read the later chps and you'll understand what I mean...overall stories dope.....read it only request add some romance and fluff, just build it..MC needs someone to love...and pls dont make the romance shallow, with a man-whore MC or some whore for a lover

Yo author is there romance in this? Not asking about harem but romance? ________________________________--------------------------------------________________________________--------------------------------------________________________________--------------------------------------________________________________--------------------------------------

The author complies requests, does a perfect job giving his book certain elements, build the mc likeadle, gave meaning to his adwenture, it has 2 things, whitch we dislike: 1.: there is no new chapter, 2.: WE CAN'T GET MOOOOOAAAAAAR! °▪︎°

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1. Mc character and progression: He was a good character, i mean an interesting way of introducing a reincarnated person and his battle junkie attitude, but went off road after his waking from ice, i mean i loved his character before time skip but didn't after timeskip, be became, annoying i guess? it's hard to explain. 2. The plot was amazing up until him getting stuck in ice, i mean i guess author didn't have other way to make him young for canon or something, but his eventual awakening and that batman thingy and all that threw me off, i mean yeah, but that's just my opinion. 3. Great portraying of fight scenes and good buildup. All in all i'd rate it a 7/10.

The further, the more chaotic the story goes. The protagonist is an intellectually deprived, absolutely unbalanced, rabid dog. Rabid dogs are not stroked, they are euthanized. In the conditions of war, such a person was simply and unpretentiously shot after the first bounce. He does not learn how he threw his fists at people in childhood, and continues to do the same when he is 30 years old. Degenerate.

I rate it with absolute 5 star dont ask me why im too lazy to write and if u ask why im writing this shit its because the fucking word cant less than 140

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