well fleshed out, good time spent reading. Just hope to whatever deity you may or may not worship to, please no harem. I hate how decent fanfics create a harem and somehow those females with strong unique qualities and history (depending on which source you favor comics, tv, movies, etc) are butchered into sheep-like characters the are okay sharing. All in all keep up the good work.
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Tell Me Why You Don't Like Harems And If You Say It Ruins The Story Which I Know You Will Because That's People Say Without Elaborating So Explain Why It Ruins It. By Saying A Harem Ruins The Story Means You Doubting The Authors Ability To Develop Relationships And Characters. A Harem Can Be Good If Its Not The Main Focus Of The Story But That Doesn't Mean It Should Be Something That Pops Up Rarely Nad Like I Said Earlier If The Characters Relationships Are Developed Well. You're Only Saying That Because You've Probably Read Badly Developed Harem Where They Fall For The Mc With No Developing.
If the Author can write the characters interactions and dynamics without making it look like a Second-hand discount, badly written *orn parody, then they have my respect, for it is not easy to write and create those scenes from the mind straight to paper. I know with fanfics many have free range to write what they wish and desire, which they should, all power to them. But when one has a great story but they try to include a subject that is difficult to include in writing and not handled properly. It makes the story's quality lower the expectation from certain readers, it makes it hard for us that originally enjoyed it to continue reading it. The Author is free to do what they wish, at the end of the day it's their story to write. If they are willing to challenge themselves to better their literary skill then they should. As long as they're aware of how some may critique and offer advice, while others will just hate and spam hate mail. They shouldn't be discouraged to continue writing. The reason I don't like Authors attempting harem with unique characters from a franchise is when, they make all the steps and responses between the female cast literally the same and it's all hunky dory. Now i'm not saying I want to see drama and turmoil between the love interest, I'm just saying make them have unique outlooks that will lead towards the harem somewhat believable to the readers. I love a good harem story as much as the next guy, And I wish the Author future success in this project and the many more they create. At the end of the day I'm one of the many fans that love finding and reading works that are posted on here.
Randomguy010:Tell Me Why You Don't Like Harems And If You Say It Ruins The Story Which I Know You Will Because That's People Say Without Elaborating So Explain Why It Ruins It. By Saying A Harem Ruins The Story Means You Doubting The Authors Ability To Develop Relationships And Characters. A Harem Can Be Good If Its Not The Main Focus Of The Story But That Doesn't Mean It Should Be Something That Pops Up Rarely Nad Like I Said Earlier If The Characters Relationships Are Developed Well. You're Only Saying That Because You've Probably Read Badly Developed Harem Where They Fall For The Mc With No Developing.
