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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv104yr
2020-10-07 00:06

Rating may change again. Author decides to nerf the MC and i understand he is “weakened” but he was completely outclassed it was pathetic. also the author just adding batman randomly? Even if it wasnt batman the guy embarassed the mc because he got nerfed and you read “Batman” quotes and all maybe 30times in that chapter. Just a few chapters ruined this fanfic. Hate when authors nerf MCs

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Karstag
4.6
75 Chs

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

Yeah with how the author is going with this story after the massive timeskip like adding batman and other random nonsense and nerfing the mc idk the story since the timeskip has been absolute trash. If the author doesnt change the mc and ruin the amazing story they had then the story would be a 5/5 and be great but it has been garbage

4yr
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Unholy_b31n9
Unholy_b31n9Lv12

is it fixed?

3yr
1
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Janbenes123
Janbenes123Lv15

So, the story itself is not bad, but the author gives MC powers that are not explained how he get them. Basically everything is done with time skips without any context whatsoever. The grammar is horrible, like rly garbage. Author rly does not care, cause even the first few chapters are not fixed. If you are looking for literature masterpiece go somewhere else. If you have nothing else to read go for it. So basically this fan-fic has more plotholes than switz-cheese.

4yr

Private_Lancelot
Private_LancelotLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Descentofpotential
DescentofpotentialLv15

Reveal spoiler

4yr
TabooExistence
TabooExistenceLv14

Amazing fanfiction plz more 😁😁😁😁😁😀😀💯💯💯💯more I hope you can continue this fanfiction.

4yr
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi stupid puta kukpa sala malakaphi ban chot mother chod bahen ki londe pi

4yr
DarkieBlackNi33er
DarkieBlackNi33erLv2

The grammar is atrocious, nothing makes sense, everything's jumbled. Oh, and the writing style is horrible.👎exactly 140 characters. Noice!!

3yr
Untold_Worlds
Untold_WorldsLv14

All your books in the MCU are really good.

4yr
JohnnyReever
JohnnyReeverLv5

Keep up the good work man . Read many fan-fictions but this is the most well put together story so far . Please keep going, you are doing a banging job . 👍🏽

4yr
Unmotivatedbro5
Unmotivatedbro5Lv15

well fleshed out, good time spent reading. Just hope to whatever deity you may or may not worship to, please no harem. I hate how decent fanfics create a harem and somehow those females with strong unique qualities and history (depending on which source you favor comics, tv, movies, etc) are butchered into sheep-like characters the are okay sharing. All in all keep up the good work.

4yr
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