See that picture....its dope right...stories even more fly...MC is a one man army, like the dude did some **** similar to king Bradly from FMA...............[ atleast thats how I imagined it] the story is in marvel during steves era, and so far MC is a beast....stories built well, character development is dope [though writer seems to have a habit of making characters disappear...not kill them, just fade out....read the later chps and you'll understand what I mean...overall stories dope.....read it only request add some romance and fluff, just build it..MC needs someone to love...and pls dont make the romance shallow, with a man-whore MC or some whore for a lover
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Aww thank yaa, you should read [Emerald]❇️, you might like it😂😂👍🏽
you wrote that...damn....ya I read it...but IDK why but never liked it, dropped after 7 chps [will re-read it now to see if I'll enjoy]...this however is gold....also read your OP FF, it was ok....just a suggestion...if ya write another FF, this time dont make MC make .teams and ****..make him on man army all the way....**: for this book try to add romance...any GL
Karstag:Aww thank yaa, you should read [Emerald]❇️, you might like it😂😂👍🏽
Hmm okay I’ll keep that in mind, been thinking of doing that a lot lately, but I’ll see what can be done in Alpha
amaturewriter:you wrote that...damn....ya I read it...but IDK why but never liked it, dropped after 7 chps [will re-read it now to see if I'll enjoy]...this however is gold....also read your OP FF, it was ok....just a suggestion...if ya write another FF, this time dont make MC make .teams and ****..make him on man army all the way....**: for this book try to add romance...any GL
Yes , I didn’t even try reading emerald because people kept saying how he just hands stuff out to people and such. I just really hate those type of mcs so I hope you don’t do that here
Karstag:Hmm okay I’ll keep that in mind, been thinking of doing that a lot lately, but I’ll see what can be done in Alpha
Well alright, but how far did you read emerald to? Just asking not trying to make you read it
50ShadesOfAss:Yes , I didn’t even try reading emerald because people kept saying how he just hands stuff out to people and such. I just really hate those type of mcs so I hope you don’t do that here
Feel ya ! Emerald is dope but i never quite liked the Idea with his disciplines and how he teaches them ! Don't know but I don't like these Types of Stories !
amaturewriter:you wrote that...damn....ya I read it...but IDK why but never liked it, dropped after 7 chps [will re-read it now to see if I'll enjoy]...this however is gold....also read your OP FF, it was ok....just a suggestion...if ya write another FF, this time dont make MC make .teams and ****..make him on man army all the way....**: for this book try to add romance...any GL
