After leaving home, she became a big shot
Because of her parents 'bias and the oppression of her family environment, Song Qingran, who had been an obedient girl for 25 years, finally rebelled the day before the blind date.
She decided to live her own life crazily and throw away all the grievances of the past 25 years!
In the end, they did not stop, and more and more lackeys followed behind them.
"Sister Ran, this is the apricot wine that my grandmother personally brewed. Would you like to try it?"
"Brother Song, what do you think of this Maybach?"
"Qingran, go wherever you want. I'll accompany you!"
She only wanted to be a carefree lone ranger, but there were more and more burdens around her. Since that was the case, she would escape!
"Sister Ran, I'll follow you wherever you go!"
"Brother Song, don't even think about abandoning me!"
" Qingran, look. We found you again." The last brother who looked like his brother smiled.
First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.