Eternal Life through Drawing Lots
【Awakened Talent · Seek Fortune, Avoid Misfortune: Once an opportunity is before you, you can rely on the luck of the draw to make a choice, obtaining fortuitous encounters and evading calamities...】
The Enlightenment Grand Ceremony is a ritual to help the youths of the Human Race step onto the path of cultivation.
【Enlightenment Grand Ceremony, the path to Changsheng begins. On Dragon Roar Peak, the mysteries are endless; destiny encounters a choice at a crossroads.】
【Mid-Upper Lot: Ascend the Fire Attribute stairs, obtain a Tier Three fortuitous encounter. Eagle strikes the vast sky, fierce flames burn the heavens. Auspicious.】
【Mid-Mid Lot: Ascend the Water Attribute stairs. Do nothing wrong by doing nothing, neither contend nor move. Nothing gained, nothing lost. Neutral.】
【Lowest Lot: Ascend the Wood Attribute stairs, obtain a Tier Seven fortuitous encounter, but it conceals a great hidden danger. A one in ten chance of survival. Greatly Inauspicious!】
"A one in ten chance of survival, practically no way to live?"
Fang Yang smiled nonchalantly: "A Tier Three fortuitous encounter is quite good. I want a steady and stable happiness, peace of mind."
Green Caterpillar's Dream · Eastern
First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.