The understanding of a certain science
There were 2.3 million people in the school city, and 80% of them were students…
In such a scientific world, there was actually magic that was both 'scientific' and unscientific.
Our main character, Comrade Hu Yang, is facing off against all sorts of magical monsters, while also guarding against the backstabbing of a certain big baldy…
Hu Yang: " Dignity is only on the edge of the sword, and truth is only within the range of the cannon. ypa!!!!”
"Hooligan…"
This article contains a very imprecise sci-fi description, please forgive me.
Autumn waters reflect the dust
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First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.