Tsundere Master's Favorite
Ghost Horse's Disciple VS Stone-faced Master (Four Lives of Entanglement and Sadistic Love Attack!)
In her first life, he was a general who galloped on the battlefield, and she was the princess of a neighboring country. She did not even want the emperor or the crown prince, she only wanted him!
In the second life, he was the Crown Prince of the previous dynasty, only to restore the country. She was the female general of the current dynasty, protecting the country and protecting the country. She would not regret her death!
In the third life, he was a world-renowned monster hunter, and she was a little fox who had just cultivated into a human form. Brother monster hunter, do you think I'm cute?
In this life, she was the only disciple under Purple Moon Immortal Venerable, and the only one in his heart.
He was the master that the Lord of the Demon World had acknowledged in this life, and he was also the calamity of this life.
The entanglement of three lifetimes, each life did not end. In the fourth life, she shattered her Demon Spiritual Pearl just to exchange for his life.
"Do you remember what I taught you?" Han Wangshu asked.
"Yes, I've engraved it in my heart," replied Lian Xuanluo.
"What should I do when I go out?" Han Wangshu asked.
"You must hold Master's hand tightly!"
"What else?" Han Wangshu asked.
She slowly walked up to him and tiptoed to plant a light kiss on his lips."In this life, in the next life, and for all eternity, I will never let go of you again."
Eating Candies on the Sixth Day
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First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.