Paranoid school bully, he just wants to spoil me
Lu Tang was the daughter of Fengshi Group, but unfortunately, she was not favored.
When he was 15 years old, he was brought back to the school. After that, he transferred to No.1 Middle School.
Deer Candy used to be ignorant and incompetent
Now that she was in a new school, she decided to turn over a new leaf and become a sweet little cutie in No.1 Middle School.
Hence, she had Qin Ci head over heels for her.
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One day, Lu Tang's former brothers came to Jiang City to see her. On the way, they quarreled with a group of people.
They all went to Deer Candy to complain and ask her to back them up.
Deer Candy didn't think it was good to fight, but she still agreed. After all, she had to do everything for her brother.
At their place
When Lu Tang heard her brother's harsh words, she felt that he was a fool. She went forward to stop him, and then she saw Qin Ci's gloomy face.
Oh my, her disguise was broken just like that?
A certain man: Didn't you tell me that you're soft and easy to push down? So this is how you push me down
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In Qin Ci's heart, Lu Tang was soft, cute, and easy to push down. However, who would have thought that she was actually a tyrant flower? Her heart was extremely black.
Little cutie in front of people, female Rakshasa behind people
Master Qin: I wonder when my Ba Wang Hua will marry me
Later, when they met again, Lu Tang was already a public idol, and Qin Ci was a rising star in business, the president of Deca.
De-deer
Ca-candy-sugar
So, candy, I've come my whole life just for you
They finally met again, putting an end to the unsettling feelings of this youth.
Deer candy was the sweetest candy Qin Ci had ever eaten.
(Special reminder: The male protagonist sometimes goes 'intermittently insane')
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First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.