Ghosthand Alchemist
Jiu Yu was the top-notch apothecary of the modern Dark Clan Pavilion. He was regarded as a thorn in the flesh by the people in the sect. In the eyes of outsiders, he was a legendary figure who existed like a god.
He died in an accident and was reborn in another world.
With her arrival, the truth of the slander that had been planned for a long time by her predecessor came to light!
From then on, fate began a stunning legend that belonged to her!
Once the hero drew his sword, it would be another ten-year tribulation for the common people.
He stepped on living beings, and his hands were on life and death. Those who despise my relatives and friends should be killed. Whoever kills my companions, destroy him.
A pair of ghostly hands could refine top-grade immortal pills, cure the dead, fight the heroes of the world, and flirt with peerless beautiful men!
With him, a flower, a world, a leaf, a pursuit, a song, a sigh, a lifetime of one person!
First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.