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Khavos_RuddLv66yr
2018-12-10 14:07

Translation: 5 Excellent, and not just because of this site. Will be looking at other works by this translator. Updates: 5 Hey, 100 uploads within hours of each other? Lets pile the pressure and see whether this rate will be maintained. If not...we can always do another review...this one with less stars...[yeah, I'm talking to your mr Translator] Story Dev'p: 3 Story officially - for me that is - picks up right around chapter 41. The rest is the usual "trash young master with stupendous comprehension but incapable of cultivating due to some unknown reason but right about the time some internal conflict with the clan arises his issue is resolved etc etc". Then of course, there is the ubiquitous 'clan extermination to give MC motivation' and escape into the wilds etc etc As of the 41st chapter, I like the twist. Usually you have the MC's clan wiped out before he engages in retaliation. Here, he has no direct relationship with the clan he was ordered to destroy save for the obvious link they [destroyed clan] had with his own enemies. Most authors like justifying the MCs actions [save for that psychotic in Reverend Insanity] so it was refreshing to see him as the aggressor in this instance Xcter design: 4 Talks to himself sometimes [I think...skimmed thru most of the first forty chapters]. He has something of a personality though; didn't get foolishly angry at someone's challenge, bows his head, isn't immediately compelled to overcome every other genius...All in all, not too bad World Background: 4 Initially gave it a 4 but dropped it back down to 3 then raised it to 4 once again. Reason? Got confused with cultivation levels. No real description of people or the world [though this could be because I skimmed thru the opening chapters but that is the author's fault] It still gets a 4 because of the explanation for comprehension levels. I truly despise meatheads and this novel is keeping far from that bad business of some cultivator only piling up mass so that they can drive their spear with greater force [looking at you Dong Bo Xue Ying and Ling Ming and Ancient Strengthening and the rest of you sorry lot]

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zaijuroLv5

Lol you’re so pitiful, a lvl 5 member but didn’t know about the infamous transn name

Khavos_RuddLv6

As someone seeking the great dao, i am above such mundane affairs

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ArchenaLv6

First Mc was cheated like a fool by a girl. Then he took a blood oath like he would never be such a foolish horny fuk again. but not even a year has past he is being fuked by girls here and there and he is literary jerking off with parasite in his dik which has no balls for girl. His balls applicable only to boys. He complains he has no money but he gave away costly pills to outside people after hearing his sob story about not being able to breakthrough who tried to snatch his herb. If you are so rich to be kind as fuk for a silly reason then why you cry that you have no money. And stupidity about giving away freebies created your first problem and you took blood oath. Now what your blood means? urine of a trash ?

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