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DaijoLv56yr
2018-12-10 08:33

Bruh. Literally the author goddamn throws it straight at you no description at all just straight up throws a scene immediately at the first chapter. We all know that the mc will be talented but this though. I was expecting a sword path novel like Dominating Sword Immortal but thats just wishful thinking I guess. The rival is a 16 year old thats already past the Qi Condensation Realm and she's as strong as maybe Mid Reality Condensation or whatever the **** that 2nd realm is from DSI. Total horse **** as we'd know that the first places are always some backwater villages or some **** and not the capital so this is way too overbounds and also the pavilions and **** aint even ranked dude just described wtf this **** sucks dick bro

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Smirk_Lv5

i dont understand a **** about your commnt with that much " *** "

DaijoLv5

Your english probably sucks don't it?

Smirk_:i dont understand a **** about your commnt with that much " *** "
lozloLv5

No, it's just that you make no sense. All I can guess from your word puke is that you're upset that the author didn't use your personal power levels, rank things using your own personal system of ranking things, and he started out with a scene instead of starting out with a long-winded explanation of the world. So, you basically have no logical complaints.

Daijo:Your english probably sucks don't it?
DaijoLv5

It's bad is what it is.

lozlo:No, it's just that you make no sense. All I can guess from your word puke is that you're upset that the author didn't use your personal power levels, rank things using your own personal system of ranking things, and he started out with a scene instead of starting out with a long-winded explanation of the world. So, you basically have no logical complaints.
DaijoLv5

There's tons of these ****ty novels around in NovelUpdates.

lozlo:No, it's just that you make no sense. All I can guess from your word puke is that you're upset that the author didn't use your personal power levels, rank things using your own personal system of ranking things, and he started out with a scene instead of starting out with a long-winded explanation of the world. So, you basically have no logical complaints.
lozloLv5

Given the fact that you think a ****ty novel is any novel that doesn't follow the rules you set for it before even reading it, I think the ****ty thing here is your opinion. But feel free to prove me wrong by actually expressing a real opinion that you didn't pull out of your ass.

Daijo:There's tons of these ****ty novels around in NovelUpdates.
lozloLv5

They only thing bad right now is your ability to read, write a remotely intelligent sentence, and give up on your trolling.

Daijo:It's bad is what it is.
DaijoLv5

It's bad. There you have it

lozlo:They only thing bad right now is your ability to read, write a remotely intelligent sentence, and give up on your trolling.
DrahuLv10

Is it a harem

Daijo:It's bad. There you have it
DaijoLv5

I don't know but the novel is bad imo it can make it up for op MC and cool moments and sht but it won't elevate it higher than a normal copy paste xianxia novel

Drahu:Is it a harem
lozloLv5

So far, no. And, it doesn't look like it's going to be a harem, which is a plus for me. I greatly dislike harem novels. But you never know for sure until the novel is finished. I've seen a few authors throw harem in at the very end.

Drahu:Is it a harem
JSKOPOPLv13

Only 1 girl

lozlo:So far, no. And, it doesn't look like it's going to be a harem, which is a plus for me. I greatly dislike harem novels. But you never know for sure until the novel is finished. I've seen a few authors throw harem in at the very end.
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