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ArchenaLv66yr
2018-12-13 11:48

1 star because author is a lying son of a fish who cheated readers. Actually many of the authors are. So if there is somehow a chance by seeing the low ratings they would change their way. First Mc was cheated like a fool by a girl. Then he took a blood oath like he would never be such a foolish horny fuk again. but not even a year has past he is being fuked by girls here and there and he is literary jerking off with parasite in his dik which has no balls for girl. His balls applicable only to boys.

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