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PotatoGodofTimeLv56yr
2018-12-10 13:05

Haven't read a single chapter yet but I'm excited for this novel hopefully it isn't harem and the villain a dumb potato :(, last I hope plot won't repeat itself like the rest of the cultivation novels :), thank you very much I like this novel...

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ReinherzLv5

Is everything alright little potato god ? Your comment seems so strangely normal.

anrolzLv4

I think this one is exciting story...

ExorFerLv6

Yeah, so strangely normal that it's not normal

Reinherz:Is everything alright little potato god ? Your comment seems so strangely normal.
MusponLv13

yeah as of late i think he has been having mental breakdowns

DaiKofuLv5

ty

TafaraLv10

So what is the conclusion?

PotatoGodofTimeLv5

I read it up to chapter 37, so far the protag isn't too overpower and know when to back down, and so far there isn't any romance yet so I guess no harem? Hopefully and he isn't a lovestruck idiot :)

Tafara:So what is the conclusion?
KougetsuLv5

Big expectations you have there. I am hoping for this in every cultivation novel I start to read. No arrogant, always saved by plot armor MC, no idiotic generic antagonists, no developing plots by making MC getting into conflicts one after another (basically everything he does, he offends someone in preparation for face slapping). But sadly you won't find this or only 1 out of like 20 novels stand out from the rest...

ArchenaLv6

First Mc was cheated like a fool by a girl. Then he took a blood oath like he would never be such a foolish horny fuk again. but not even a year has past he is being fuked by girls here and there and he is literary jerking off with parasite in his dik which has no balls for girl. His balls applicable only to boys. He complains he has no money but he gave away costly pills to outside people after hearing his sob story about not being able to breakthrough who tried to snatch his herb. If you are so rich to be kind as fuk for a silly reason then why you cry that you have no money. And stupidity about giving away freebies created your first problem and you took blood oath. Now what your blood means? urine of a trash ?

bobbarianLv6

ty

DaiKofuLv5

ty

ace_18Lv5

👍👍

SanksLv10

I had big expectations from the review.. Unfortunately you have an un-potato-godistic review. Didn't expect such mortal antics from a revered god like you.

PotatoGodofTimeLv5

I'm sorry but I'm tired now...i don't want to ruin anymore novels base in my review so I quit... :(

Sanks:I had big expectations from the review.. Unfortunately you have an un-potato-godistic review. Didn't expect such mortal antics from a revered god like you.
SanksLv10

Well that's sad. I enjoyed reading your reviews more than the novels.

PotatoGodofTime:I'm sorry but I'm tired now...i don't want to ruin anymore novels base in my review so I quit... :(
PotatoGodofTimeLv5

Thx for the compliment:3

Sanks:Well that's sad. I enjoyed reading your reviews more than the novels.
SanksLv10

Well look at the first review on invincible KungFu healer. I'm not the only one, Almighty good of potatoes has many followers

PotatoGodofTime:Thx for the compliment:3
eriscasueLv15

Hhmm. Its not that cliche, its good actually. As for 150+ chaps no harem hahaha

PunnyanyaLv13

And we've come this far, where this novel with potential getting disease that is worse than ligma, going premium.

PotatoGodofTimeLv5

D:

Punnyanya:And we've come this far, where this novel with potential getting disease that is worse than ligma, going premium.
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