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AlternativeLv46yr
2018-10-03 12:36

I've been reading this novel for months...calmly waiting for the next day's chapter though it's just 3 chaps per day...yet here it is...on webnovel..going premium...though it says it's gonna be dual hosted and get released on both site simultaniously...wth man...webnovel is trying everything to gain profits huh..well played webnovel..wellplayed..you too translator..F word to all those lies you told few weeks ago. Truly am dissapointed.

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RaexLv5

I have read up to Chapter 100 at this point of this review. This review is about the negatives of the story til Chapter 100. 1. MC is Lvl 6 as of then. However, the issue is that MC has past knowledge of game-changing events and takes advantage of this. Making him really OP. He has way way above average attibutes. He also obtains the Silvermoon Set Equipment - said to be the best for players below Lvl 10. He has a Magic Weapon and a Secret Silver Weapon. He also has a Forging Exp Bonus too. With his current stats, he is able to defeat Monsters with at least 5 Lvls above him, when other Veteran Elites cannot due to the stat/equipment difference. He also completes Uniques Quests, obtaining him huge amounts of Exp, thus others can nvr get these Quests again. This would lead you to think that MC is the only player to hit Lvl 6. However, it is not the fact. So how then, did the other Lvl 6 players, who neither have the knowledge of the game as MC, nor do they have the Stats or Equipment as MC, even obtain enough Exp to hit Lvl 6? MC can deal 100+ Damage to high-levelled Monsters as compared to an Elite Party who can only deal single digit damage to such Monsters. MC farming rate is obvs way higher than the others....but somehow they still manage to catch up with the MC. Ridiculous! 2. Blackie and co has 8 Lvl 2-3 Bronze Equipment on each of them after grinding at an undisclosed and uncompeted high-levelled area as advised by MC. After meeting up with him for the Team Dungeon, they swap into Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment which the MC obtained during his various Unique Quests alone. At the Team Dungeon, somehow Gentle Snow and her Party have already obtained Myst-Iron aset Equipment and she has a Secret Silver Weapon. This was just after they only had Bronze Equipment approximately a few hours before they left MC during one of his harder Unique Quests - To obtain the Titan's Heart. How then, did they obtain Myst-Iron Set Equipment, if they did not have such a premium location as Blackie and co? They do not have a Forger who can forge Myst-Iron Equipment nor can they complete Quests of MC's lvl due to their lack of game knowldge and skill stats. It is like the Set Equipment miraculously appeared in their Inventory. Plus it was her whole Party not her alone! Flabbergasted! 3. The average Elite has Bronze Equipment of Lvl 2-3, since they can neither obtain Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment due to not having MC's prowess in defeating high-lvl Monsters. Yet they say that Blackie and co's Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment is low-lvled....Umm what?! Do they have Lvl 10 Bronze Equipment? Outrageous! 4. Females in this novel is mostly portrayed as wanting to go and warm the beds with anyonr who is deemed stronger than them, apart from Gentle Snow and Violet Storm. The author has some serious issues regarding females. If this puts you off, but want to read, you better brace yourself as in the past 100 chapters there have been 4-5 occassions... and I bet there will be more in the later chapters. Disgusting! 5. Equipment Rarity ranges from Trash, Common, Bronze, Myst-Iron, Secret-Silver, Fine-Gold, Dark-Gold, and Epic. At least Magic Weapons are introduced with a backstory. However, suddenly there is a Legendary tier which is not even introduced before. And it is mentioned quite often without any backstory. Puzzling! Overall, what I cant stand about this novel so far is the lack of consistency in some areas. The author probably did not want the MC and his Party to be so OP, but forgot about the difference in MC and the others - His expertise of the game due to his reincarnation. And this led to plot holes in the story.

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RaexLv5

Coming off my last review, I have finally given up hope of the author in having any common sense at all. Positive thing is that the author has severely reduced his sl*tty portrayal of females in the story, apart from Sharlyn. Other than that, the author is blatantly not considering how the other players even get their Lvls so fast when they do not reach the capabilities of the members of Zero Wing. Take this for example. During the Crusade Quest, the core members of Zero Wing manage to occupy the Top 100 Ranking List of players. They were Lvl 22 and above, as stated by the author. The previous No.9 was Tyrant who was Lvl 21(was annoyed at how he even got Lvl 21 too). The author even stated that the 1 lvl diff in Lvl 21 and 22 were like heaven and earth. Any player would have to grind for long periods to get to Lvl 22. Yet only after a few days, there are players who already reached Lvl 24. Amazing farming rate, even better than Zero Wing or MC. Though you can say that most spent time trying to complete their Class Change Quest, it was at most 2 days. Yet those.Lvl 24 players, who in theory cannot even defeat Lvl 30 NPCs, which MC helped Zero Wing with their upgraded Equipment to defeat, somehow gained so much Exp in a short timeframe. All because the author wants to create an "underestimated protagonist" scene for the 5v5 Duel in the Arena. Better still, one of the players already has full FineGold Equipment and a DarkGold Weapon. MC doesnt even have full FineGold Equipment. At this point, to not have MC be too far ahead of the other players, he has to resort to plucking numbers out of the sky and use them as the player Lvls. All without consideration of how these players would even obtain such high Exp. Seriously, if you are looking for consistency in this story, especially if player Lvls are a must for you, be prepared for a lot of blood puking, because it is a sh*t show out there. I have no idea how many times I have raged over this matter. You can say that maybe Im too into the details of the story and need to chill out and enjoy it from a different perspective, but details are what make the story. Consistent details are the ones that make a good author distinguish from a bad one. I can already forgive the author for blatant plagiarism from different Animes such as SAO and Log Horizon. Even OnePunchMan (wait till the Big Dipper Training Centre part). Just be aware if you want to read this story.

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