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Raex
RaexLv56yr
2018-08-28 21:31

Coming off my last review, I have finally given up hope of the author in having any common sense at all. Positive thing is that the author has severely reduced his sl*tty portrayal of females in the story, apart from Sharlyn. Other than that, the author is blatantly not considering how the other players even get their Lvls so fast when they do not reach the capabilities of the members of Zero Wing. Take this for example. During the Crusade Quest, the core members of Zero Wing manage to occupy the Top 100 Ranking List of players. They were Lvl 22 and above, as stated by the author. The previous No.9 was Tyrant who was Lvl 21(was annoyed at how he even got Lvl 21 too). The author even stated that the 1 lvl diff in Lvl 21 and 22 were like heaven and earth. Any player would have to grind for long periods to get to Lvl 22. Yet only after a few days, there are players who already reached Lvl 24. Amazing farming rate, even better than Zero Wing or MC. Though you can say that most spent time trying to complete their Class Change Quest, it was at most 2 days. Yet those.Lvl 24 players, who in theory cannot even defeat Lvl 30 NPCs, which MC helped Zero Wing with their upgraded Equipment to defeat, somehow gained so much Exp in a short timeframe. All because the author wants to create an "underestimated protagonist" scene for the 5v5 Duel in the Arena. Better still, one of the players already has full FineGold Equipment and a DarkGold Weapon. MC doesnt even have full FineGold Equipment. At this point, to not have MC be too far ahead of the other players, he has to resort to plucking numbers out of the sky and use them as the player Lvls. All without consideration of how these players would even obtain such high Exp. Seriously, if you are looking for consistency in this story, especially if player Lvls are a must for you, be prepared for a lot of blood puking, because it is a sh*t show out there. I have no idea how many times I have raged over this matter. You can say that maybe Im too into the details of the story and need to chill out and enjoy it from a different perspective, but details are what make the story. Consistent details are the ones that make a good author distinguish from a bad one. I can already forgive the author for blatant plagiarism from different Animes such as SAO and Log Horizon. Even OnePunchMan (wait till the Big Dipper Training Centre part). Just be aware if you want to read this story.

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RandomNovelReader
RandomNovelReaderLv5

is it that bad?also,could you recommend me a better novel than this one of the same genre?

Raex
RaexLv5

Hm...you can try The New Gate. It is sort of a reincarnation, OP protagonist, he also tries to hide his identity. I emjoyed this novel. You can read it on ShinTranslations. It is currently being translated but it is up to Book 10 nkw.

RandomNovelReader:is it that bad?also,could you recommend me a better novel than this one of the same genre?
RandomNovelReader
RandomNovelReaderLv5

thanks but I am already reading the manga of "The New Gate",is the novel much better?

Raex:Hm...you can try The New Gate. It is sort of a reincarnation, OP protagonist, he also tries to hide his identity. I emjoyed this novel. You can read it on ShinTranslations. It is currently being translated but it is up to Book 10 nkw.
ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

Listen to this Man, I'm one of his followers and he is justified in his Raging. The Author is really bad about any narrative consistency.

Raex
RaexLv5

Yea. Its much better. Manga follows the story real well too. But its slower obvs. You can also try MVC and Doomsday too. I like it a lot. The author adds stuff too at points in the story, but he doesnt forget them and also is very consistent.

RandomNovelReader:thanks but I am already reading the manga of "The New Gate",is the novel much better?
Raex
RaexLv5

Have you read My MVC and Doomsday on Webnovel? Its a good consistent novel where the author of this story fails to do so. MvC's author adds stuff too but also provides background and its very self satifying to watch MC wreck the antagonist.

ThrustThunder:Listen to this Man, I'm one of his followers and he is justified in his Raging. The Author is really bad about any narrative consistency.
Raex
RaexLv5

These r the stories in my Library right now. 1. LEGEND OF Ling Tian 2. Legend of FuTian 3. Overworldly Evil Monarch 4. MVC and Doomsday Books on other sites: 1. The New Gate 2. Monarch of Evernight Try those too if you like OP protagonist and Underestimated protagonist.

RandomNovelReader:thanks but I am already reading the manga of "The New Gate",is the novel much better?
ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

Ive heard bad thigs about it. That the MC is just as shortsighted as this one is. And the Author pulls stuff out of his butt just as bafly.

Raex:Have you read My MVC and Doomsday on Webnovel? Its a good consistent novel where the author of this story fails to do so. MvC's author adds stuff too but also provides background and its very self satifying to watch MC wreck the antagonist.
Raex
RaexLv5

Yes, I think there was a situation like that. But I mainly enjoy that story for its Apocalyptic style and also that MC has a small squad and a mobile vehicle. So there is no need to build a town or something like that.

ThrustThunder:Ive heard bad thigs about it. That the MC is just as shortsighted as this one is. And the Author pulls stuff out of his butt just as bafly.
RandomNovelReader
RandomNovelReaderLv5

thank you very much

Raex:These r the stories in my Library right now. 1. LEGEND OF Ling Tian 2. Legend of FuTian 3. Overworldly Evil Monarch 4. MVC and Doomsday Books on other sites: 1. The New Gate 2. Monarch of Evernight Try those too if you like OP protagonist and Underestimated protagonist.
Bunny
BunnyLv12

Whaaa, but you don’t have It’s Not Easy to be a Man After Traveling to the Future? She’s one of the best op MCs on this site imo. The world building is great and more importantly consistent. Plot threads introduced stay relevant. It’s great, the antagonists aren’t all stupid, they just genuinely either get outmatched or she out plans them. Though it’s not reincarnation but transmigration, but she’s such a hard worker it’s great. The character development for all the characters is great aswell.

Raex:These r the stories in my Library right now. 1. LEGEND OF Ling Tian 2. Legend of FuTian 3. Overworldly Evil Monarch 4. MVC and Doomsday Books on other sites: 1. The New Gate 2. Monarch of Evernight Try those too if you like OP protagonist and Underestimated protagonist.
Raex
RaexLv5

Ooh...Thanks for the recommendation. I will definitely have a read.

Bunny:Whaaa, but you don’t have It’s Not Easy to be a Man After Traveling to the Future? She’s one of the best op MCs on this site imo. The world building is great and more importantly consistent. Plot threads introduced stay relevant. It’s great, the antagonists aren’t all stupid, they just genuinely either get outmatched or she out plans them. Though it’s not reincarnation but transmigration, but she’s such a hard worker it’s great. The character development for all the characters is great aswell.
Bunny
BunnyLv12

For sure! Let me know what you think when you get around to it. :)

Raex:Ooh...Thanks for the recommendation. I will definitely have a read.
Raex
RaexLv5

Omg....that story you recommendrd to me is my type of story....just likr Legend of Ling Tian but female version..... Thank you so much....gave me lots of laughter too and the much needed relief after reading Reincarnation of the Sword God.

Bunny:For sure! Let me know what you think when you get around to it. :)
Bunny
BunnyLv12

No problem! The translator is also really involved and takes time out to read and respond to comments. It’s my favorite story on Webnovel! And I go back and re-read it because the fights get so epic! How far have you gotten?

Raex:Omg....that story you recommendrd to me is my type of story....just likr Legend of Ling Tian but female version..... Thank you so much....gave me lots of laughter too and the much needed relief after reading Reincarnation of the Sword God.
Raex
RaexLv5

I am currently on Chapter 51. Its a damn good read. Finally, a novel worthy of my time. 😚

Bunny:No problem! The translator is also really involved and takes time out to read and respond to comments. It’s my favorite story on Webnovel! And I go back and re-read it because the fights get so epic! How far have you gotten?
Bunny
BunnyLv12

Great! Enjoy! Welcome to the Cult haha. By the time you reach the current chapters you’ll be a complete victim. Even the summary chapters are satisfying haha!

Raex:I am currently on Chapter 51. Its a damn good read. Finally, a novel worthy of my time. 😚
Raex
RaexLv5

I forgot to mention...Little Four is like the Starseed in Jiang LiuShi's mind in My MVC and Doomsday.

Bunny:Great! Enjoy! Welcome to the Cult haha. By the time you reach the current chapters you’ll be a complete victim. Even the summary chapters are satisfying haha!
Bunny
BunnyLv12

I feel like he has a bit more... personality? But his role will become much more prevelant as the story continues. It’s really sweet, actually. If you like those two you’re going to love how this develops.

Raex:I forgot to mention...Little Four is like the Starseed in Jiang LiuShi's mind in My MVC and Doomsday.
Raex
RaexLv5

Yes. He defo has more interaction with MC. Starseed is just like a notification bell sounding everytime it finds something beneficial. Love that there is a "personal assistant" for Ling Lan. One thing that is troubling me....does all babies have such learning devices? Or is Ling Lan a special case...? Thanks.

Bunny:I feel like he has a bit more... personality? But his role will become much more prevelant as the story continues. It’s really sweet, actually. If you like those two you’re going to love how this develops.
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Raex
RaexLv5

I have read up to Chapter 100 at this point of this review. This review is about the negatives of the story til Chapter 100. 1. MC is Lvl 6 as of then. However, the issue is that MC has past knowledge of game-changing events and takes advantage of this. Making him really OP. He has way way above average attibutes. He also obtains the Silvermoon Set Equipment - said to be the best for players below Lvl 10. He has a Magic Weapon and a Secret Silver Weapon. He also has a Forging Exp Bonus too. With his current stats, he is able to defeat Monsters with at least 5 Lvls above him, when other Veteran Elites cannot due to the stat/equipment difference. He also completes Uniques Quests, obtaining him huge amounts of Exp, thus others can nvr get these Quests again. This would lead you to think that MC is the only player to hit Lvl 6. However, it is not the fact. So how then, did the other Lvl 6 players, who neither have the knowledge of the game as MC, nor do they have the Stats or Equipment as MC, even obtain enough Exp to hit Lvl 6? MC can deal 100+ Damage to high-levelled Monsters as compared to an Elite Party who can only deal single digit damage to such Monsters. MC farming rate is obvs way higher than the others....but somehow they still manage to catch up with the MC. Ridiculous! 2. Blackie and co has 8 Lvl 2-3 Bronze Equipment on each of them after grinding at an undisclosed and uncompeted high-levelled area as advised by MC. After meeting up with him for the Team Dungeon, they swap into Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment which the MC obtained during his various Unique Quests alone. At the Team Dungeon, somehow Gentle Snow and her Party have already obtained Myst-Iron aset Equipment and she has a Secret Silver Weapon. This was just after they only had Bronze Equipment approximately a few hours before they left MC during one of his harder Unique Quests - To obtain the Titan's Heart. How then, did they obtain Myst-Iron Set Equipment, if they did not have such a premium location as Blackie and co? They do not have a Forger who can forge Myst-Iron Equipment nor can they complete Quests of MC's lvl due to their lack of game knowldge and skill stats. It is like the Set Equipment miraculously appeared in their Inventory. Plus it was her whole Party not her alone! Flabbergasted! 3. The average Elite has Bronze Equipment of Lvl 2-3, since they can neither obtain Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment due to not having MC's prowess in defeating high-lvl Monsters. Yet they say that Blackie and co's Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment is low-lvled....Umm what?! Do they have Lvl 10 Bronze Equipment? Outrageous! 4. Females in this novel is mostly portrayed as wanting to go and warm the beds with anyonr who is deemed stronger than them, apart from Gentle Snow and Violet Storm. The author has some serious issues regarding females. If this puts you off, but want to read, you better brace yourself as in the past 100 chapters there have been 4-5 occassions... and I bet there will be more in the later chapters. Disgusting! 5. Equipment Rarity ranges from Trash, Common, Bronze, Myst-Iron, Secret-Silver, Fine-Gold, Dark-Gold, and Epic. At least Magic Weapons are introduced with a backstory. However, suddenly there is a Legendary tier which is not even introduced before. And it is mentioned quite often without any backstory. Puzzling! Overall, what I cant stand about this novel so far is the lack of consistency in some areas. The author probably did not want the MC and his Party to be so OP, but forgot about the difference in MC and the others - His expertise of the game due to his reincarnation. And this led to plot holes in the story.

yasensn
yasensnLv5

Not a bad story but profoundly stupid. Writing/translation/editing are good and its easy and enjoyable to read but the author has crammed every cliche in the story. MC is a scrawny nobody hat even flies wouldnt **** on but his 1337 gaming skills make him the terminator in real life. Men LITERALLY faint in fear when they see how awesome he is and women are so wet they need a diaper to go in public. On top of that I doubt the author played a single MMO in his life. MC is a melee fighter with no healing ability yet he constantly soloes high level elites. How? He never gets hit during battles since he put a few points in agility. He is a reincarnator who developed a major guild and knew a lot of great players. Does he develop a great team and do dungeons with them? No, only invites his old friend to join him and then we dont hear from that old friend in the next 80 chapters. Then we have the game economy. Its retarded. Guilds are giving millions irl to recruit players but their ingame worth is only a gold coin or two. Yet when MC sells a bunch of gold coins for real money he can only afford to buy some food before running out of money. MC knows where a bunch of valuable chests and locations are but does he go around collecting amazing stuff? No, he spends his gametime in the city zone leveling his crafting. Don't get me wrong. The story is enjoyable to read. But its so, so, SO damn stupid at times that couldn't help noticing and had to write a few words about it. Look at "The thief who roamed the world" for how to do this properly. Or Zhan Long is also quite good.

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