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KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv137yr
2017-09-08 07:22

First of all, this story should have a comedy tag. And ironically it took me about 40+ chapters to find something that made me laugh. Writing and translation seems good. Bad the story gets boring for me. The MC is an unlucky loser who is here just to get tortured, berated, humiliated, abused and discarded. He is worth nothing. Even though he wants to gain strength, he is such a lowlife. I feel like author is using the suffering MC and illogical, just for gag, unusual, never before seen, Unwanted AI for no particular reason just to make it funny. Which I feel is a horrible thing but passable due to it's jerky attitude. The story reminds of Japanese MC whom I hate because they are spineless and abused most of the time. Church also adds to that JP novel feel. Critically just read to pass time. Leave your logic somewhere else before reading. And prepare for a loser MC.

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matias2320
matias2320Lv4

Lol, i was wondering if this was worth reading but with your review i think ill pass... I dotn like much the novels with that kind of mc or those forced situations to make you laugh (that are not really funny at all)

KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv13

It's different from usual format but I felt it has a heavy Japanese taste. Sadly the writing quality is good and even villain are given some backstory. I personally did not like the MC and the stupid AI. You should try and see for ur self. You might like it. I dropped pretty early on so both sure how it is later on

KGeno
KGenoLv5

badly, if the mc is given more power than it currently has, it would be too much op. In this novel you have to be patient, because at first it will be a little boring but then it will give you a pleasant surprise with a surprising twist in the plot that will make you ask if it is the same story you have read. If you have patience you will find a jewel.

KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv13

Yea, I noticed but the MC ruins the story for me. He is not interesting to me.

KGeno:badly, if the mc is given more power than it currently has, it would be too much op. In this novel you have to be patient, because at first it will be a little boring but then it will give you a pleasant surprise with a surprising twist in the plot that will make you ask if it is the same story you have read. If you have patience you will find a jewel.
KGeno
KGenoLv5

In fact I love how is the mc (I'm tired of mc proud that they believe the center of the world, although technically they are, but still a little humility at the right times will not harm anyone) Well, that's in my personal taste. 😊

KingBiBiK:Yea, I noticed but the MC ruins the story for me. He is not interesting to me.
Kailour
KailourLv6

The current chapter is in the 600's, making such an opinion by chapter 44, when the MC isn't even well established yet, is foolish.

KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv13

Haha. Commenting about how the current chapter is in the 600's and comparing how my opinion was based till chapter 44 is extremely foolish. Because my review was from 9-10 months ago when the chapters were below 100. I tried to read it through but the stupid AI and the MC's experiences were so horrible to me, The comic stuff were so dull and weird. I do not remember too much but heard the story started to develop later. Here is one comment I put in lesserWrath's review. "Stupid comic stuff ruins the other wise potential story. The only thing that made me laugh is in Ch40+ when the AI switched his mage training memory with jerking off lol." Did not get a chance to continue after that.

Kailour:The current chapter is in the 600's, making such an opinion by chapter 44, when the MC isn't even well established yet, is foolish.
Kailour
KailourLv6

9 months ago the chapters were around 145, I believe. Though I overlooked when your comment was posted, if the only thing you found funny in 44 chapters was truly "when the AI switched his mage training memory with jerking off" then I'll agree this probably isn't the type of novel for you, might wanna give a Harem novel a shot instead.

Jocojoco
JocojocoLv2

bs review, the MC suffers like this only at the begining, one has to start somewhere to improve, from a ****ty misfit to a revolutionist badars!

matias2320:Lol, i was wondering if this was worth reading but with your review i think ill pass... I dotn like much the novels with that kind of mc or those forced situations to make you laugh (that are not really funny at all)
Readingknight
ReadingknightLv4

I started to laugh when he start complained his condition maybe I'll read it later since I have other story to read right now

HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4

lmao have you never watched anime ?

KGeno:In fact I love how is the mc (I'm tired of mc proud that they believe the center of the world, although technically they are, but still a little humility at the right times will not harm anyone) Well, that's in my personal taste. 😊
KGeno
KGenoLv5

Ehhh yes. Why?

HEHAASS:lmao have you never watched anime ?
HEHAASS
HEHAASSLv4

most of the times it'e the savior type of mc and other typical sh.it. The only novels where the mc acts arrogant is mostly in chinese novels. Japanese anime most of the time have a mc who is just like the one in the story.most of the times it'e the savior type of mc and other typical sh.it. The only novels where the mc acts arrogant is mostly in chinese anime. Japanese anime most of the time have a mc who is just like the one in the story.

KGeno:Ehhh yes. Why?
Zedsdeadbaby
ZedsdeadbabyLv4

But what if we want something insanely OP, an MC so powerful that they defeat everything literally instantly, without any opponents?

KGeno:badly, if the mc is given more power than it currently has, it would be too much op. In this novel you have to be patient, because at first it will be a little boring but then it will give you a pleasant surprise with a surprising twist in the plot that will make you ask if it is the same story you have read. If you have patience you will find a jewel.
zinzinhai
zinzinhaiLv5

dude i should’ve read ur comment first.....damn this type of novel is just not my cup of tea.....thanks for info.....

Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

Imagine having to read 600 chapters to realize you don't like the mc or story (People always act as if you can't form an opinion early on)

KingBiBiK:Haha. Commenting about how the current chapter is in the 600's and comparing how my opinion was based till chapter 44 is extremely foolish. Because my review was from 9-10 months ago when the chapters were below 100. I tried to read it through but the stupid AI and the MC's experiences were so horrible to me, The comic stuff were so dull and weird. I do not remember too much but heard the story started to develop later. Here is one comment I put in lesserWrath's review. "Stupid comic stuff ruins the other wise potential story. The only thing that made me laugh is in Ch40+ when the AI switched his mage training memory with jerking off lol." Did not get a chance to continue after that.
Elodin
ElodinLv11

Well, this review is ****ty beyond redemption. MC comes to the new world without memories of host body and without a cheat(AI has almost zero PROs throughout the story). And you whine that he was abused in 1st 5% of the chapters under such conditions?))) Well, this story is definitely not a top tier, but at least above average. It gets really better and better after MC gets out of the capital, he becomes no pushover, gains some powers, establishes his own force, etc. The plot and magical system are interesting. No harem, which is a huge plus for me, but sadly no romance at all. No young masters surprised that he kills them because they tried to kill 1st. No cheat AI system, and although MC's powers are some sort of cheat itself - they are organically incorporated in world's magic system and its history, moreover not unique to him in the story. The plot, despite being church vs mages cliche is interesting and becomes better and better with different twist, unexpected revelations, etc plus it has a good ending with all loose ends tied up.

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Division
DivisionLv4

This story is hilarious. Ok, so maybe it's got a "witty AI cliché." But this is not a "system," alright? It doesn't level up, it doesn't give missions, it doesn't analyze any components or anything. It doesn't make reality into a game. So it doesn't really match the cliché. Ok, so other than the AI cliché, there's the "Church vs Mage" cliché. Well... that's true. Not sure what to say about that for now, it's still too soon to see. So I've given World Background three stars. (As of Chapter 20.) And there's the "reincarnation" cliché. Also true. And to make it worse, he reincarnates into a useless young master! But... firstly, most of those novels have the young master die in peace, usually with allies around or in their bedroom. Secondly, it's usually either some hidden plot or an accident. Finally, they have their former identity's memories to aid them. Not so here. He's still in the middle of danger, no memories whatsoever, and had to use his wits to escape. In my humble opinion, this novel has been done really well. So far, the aspects that have made the most impact on me have been the humor and the relationships. The MC is the perfect example of the average guy, which is actually the most impactful type of MC. He even reads webnovels, just like us! So relatable! To quote an Honest Trailer video, "he steals the show just by reacting to stuff." On the more serious side, though, are the relationships. First, the interactions between the MC and the mages and Church. This is a game of outwitting one another. MC's unreliable narrator side comes in here to draw the reader into the plot and then trick them. It's quite effective. Being drawn into one of MC's delusions and thinking that it's actually happening, until something so unbelievable happens that you're like, "Wait, what? That's too eas— ohhhh." Second, the deeper relationships. So far I'd say I've seen only a few of these. However, while both may be clichés (whore/savior, mother/son), both were lovingly written. Annie's character, especially, was just tragic. Finally, I would like to address the two extremes of reviews that have shown up on this novel. One person has left a one star review due to his dissatisfaction with QI. Several others have tried to offset this by rating five stars meaninglessly. I think both of these reviews are harmful and should be edited or removed. Neither are subjective ratings of the quality of the novel itself. Okay, I've said my piece. Now you should go read this.

Io3ol_TheGoat
Io3ol_TheGoatLv4

[Review after reading Chapter 305] Thy read shall be blessed with laughter. For this novel has no freaking so cliché mc. Were the mc give obvious reasoning and get praise like a genus or an mc said to be average but think like a mad man. The MC cheat were useless at first then get better. It has the recording skill stuff. But his system has unique personality. The system don't give quest and rewards. It's just like video recorder & editor with personality that annoys the user. The world building is Great(4/5). We discover the mystery of the world together with the mc. The world the mc has been teleported has its mystery. The author gives us the different world information/view of different group/individual about the world and which it becomes a puzzle piece which the mc have to put together correctly. As I said(write) earlier we also will solve this puzzle together with the mc(well it's not like we can help him solve it. What I mean is that we solve the puzzle by following the idea of the mc or not(and it's also fun to do it. It's healthy for your brain!)) so basically we have think which is the right info about the world. With the more hidden mystery being uncovered about the world. It started ****** with the curch world info to mage world info to then which another source of world info. The mc is average in which we can relate. The development of the story was smooth and make ones want to read more(I don't know about the other people). It's a story of out smarting one another. The enemy of the mc us not just the cliché church but more and different enemys. And lastly! It also funny. With the interaction of the characters in which is realistic(in which I like) and it also funny. The system is no boring system. The system and the mc is like(?) partners. They help each other to survive! With the system funny commentary about the event that is happening mix with the reaction of the mc. It comedy is gold! The mc is not too op. He always find himself in death door(he also not weak. It's that his luck of finding strong foe is splendid!) Overall! This novel deserve more readers and needed to be high rank! Really!? How those this novel not get to the top? Also Mr. Benji rocks!

rapibhousecat
rapibhousecatLv10

As a big fan of the anti-hero genre I had decent hopes for this story. In the beginning I was patient and let the story slowly (50+ chapters) unfold before getting to the excitement. With only minor complaints about translation quality I was hooked for hundreds of chapters. I've seen people mention this has comedy but I've never noticed anything funny in the entire story. It's action with a couple failed attempts at comedy very early on. This is a story about a man that travels across time and space to suddenly wake up in a different body in a different world. Yea, that last sentence means almost nothing in this story. He wakes up confused then gets on with his new life. Author didn't even bother with a real back story. The Good: This story can be very entertaining at times. There are a lot of battles; sometimes with magic, sometimes wits, and sometimes just regular brawling. Our main character can be cold and ruthless for most of the story. Later on his personality changes a bit because his responsibilities change. Although I don't personally like how big the difference is but I do appreciate the author trying to evolve him over the story. Lastly there is a lot of different mysterious powers to keep you in eager anticipation for the first half of the story. The Bad: Almost every side character is completely 2D. The author does not spend any time fleshing out anyone besides the main character. The originally useless System (yes he names it The System) powers up over the story and kind of ruins the feeling that our main character is smart when every few paragraphs he's asking The System to think for him. After hearing The System explain to him and advise him he will tell it to repeat itself in ******r words. Then he will- A: Repeat exactly what the system told him to others around himself to sound smart. B: Still not understand, get angry and attack The System. C: Ignore it and do what he wants regardless of the danger or consequences clearly coming despite it being right every single time. The Ugly: The translation. The actual world geography. The number of enemies. The names of characters. The incompetence of every country other than the enemy. I wont go into spoiler details on the last one but read on if you want to know how bad this story gets in the later half. The translation of this story will lead you to question many things. In the beginning I was fine reading it but the later half has become broken sentences that you must think about to try and understand. Beyond the terrible sentence structure, the translators sometimes throws out things like "shallow yet deep" describing a cut. That's a real example to expect almost every chapter later on. I have to assume this is machine translated with a non-English speaking editor for the later half. The geography is confusing as distances and travel time seem to vary greatly as the story goes on. Sometimes it may take our main character days of travel flying at high speeds and other times hours to go to and from the same place. Other times it will seem that regular foot soldiers have the ability to teleport across the continent. Despite describing the countries directions I still have no idea the actual shape of the continent. We only get a vague sense of something being north or south, east or west. The number of enemies that our main character kills escalates quickly in the later half of the story. Thousands will die in seconds yet this never seems to actually effect the enemy. There are always many more enemies no matter how many thousands die. I'm talking about human enemies that have a special power that not just anybody has. They need to grow up and receive special training. Somehow they are in limitless supply to the point that they are best described as a never ending horde. Every country besides the enemy country is pathetic. They are powerless and only really concerned with making sure none of their neighbors gets stronger than them. The enemy will invade them repeatedly with only our main character able to stand against them. Last but probably the most glaring issue that I've ever seen in any Chinese web novel series is this stories characters names. This should go under translation issues but it is so bad that I made it separate. It's understandable to occasionally get mixed up or a new translator/editor makes name changes but this... From chapter to chapter the characters names will not only change but the wrong characters name will appear in place of it. You will often wonder how so-and-so suddenly is back in the story only to realize it's a different character but the translator or editor forgot/ didn't notice/ doesn't care. I say doesn't care because these have been pointed out repeatedly over months with no effort to fix. Overall I do recommend this story. I've enjoyed it enough that it was worth the read. Such a shame that poor translation makes the later half drop in quality. As of chapter 745 the author has kind of written himself into a bind and is just pulling out whatever to keep the story going but I recommend the first few hundred chapters for anyone looking to read a magical action story.

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