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AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv56yr
2018-10-26 03:33

This review is solely on the novel going premium. You QI have destroyed any hope that there will be any future readers what so ever on this novel. You have pay walled all chapters starting at around ch 150. It would have been fine if you only decided to paywall future chapters but this kind of model will not survive in the slightest. Translators have survived before w/o you QI. What you are doing is destroying works that people put their hearts and soul into. What i mean by destroying is that there will be no new readers thus will have this novel be pushed and pushed ( making it harder to find ) to the back while new novels keep releasing. Don't give me that BS that the paywall helps the translator and author. YES they do get minimal pay from it but why when ppl can use other platforms which is way more beneficial for the translator, author, and the readers. What i see you as QI is a leach that feeds off others hard work. You steal, lie, and pretend as something that your not. You sit behind your desk manipulating people into thinking that they need you. In reality they do not. Translators can survive without your slave contracts.

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Boiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
BoiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiLv3

This *USED* to be my fave novel. I'd tune in and wait for the updates. I'd even wait through the adds. But the fact they wanted me to *pay*! Disgraceful. I'd thought I'd come back to check out if it's gone back to the free platform. I have enough trouble with FUCKING DLC in games! Seeing you also express it. Fucking gold kiddo.

Slap_king
Slap_kingLv4

this didn't age well!! Ahh, the good ol'days when novels had a 150 chapter paywall.

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Io3ol_TheGoat
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[Review after reading Chapter 305] Thy read shall be blessed with laughter. For this novel has no freaking so cliché mc. Were the mc give obvious reasoning and get praise like a genus or an mc said to be average but think like a mad man. The MC cheat were useless at first then get better. It has the recording skill stuff. But his system has unique personality. The system don't give quest and rewards. It's just like video recorder & editor with personality that annoys the user. The world building is Great(4/5). We discover the mystery of the world together with the mc. The world the mc has been teleported has its mystery. The author gives us the different world information/view of different group/individual about the world and which it becomes a puzzle piece which the mc have to put together correctly. As I said(write) earlier we also will solve this puzzle together with the mc(well it's not like we can help him solve it. What I mean is that we solve the puzzle by following the idea of the mc or not(and it's also fun to do it. It's healthy for your brain!)) so basically we have think which is the right info about the world. With the more hidden mystery being uncovered about the world. It started ****** with the curch world info to mage world info to then which another source of world info. The mc is average in which we can relate. The development of the story was smooth and make ones want to read more(I don't know about the other people). It's a story of out smarting one another. The enemy of the mc us not just the cliché church but more and different enemys. And lastly! It also funny. With the interaction of the characters in which is realistic(in which I like) and it also funny. The system is no boring system. The system and the mc is like(?) partners. They help each other to survive! With the system funny commentary about the event that is happening mix with the reaction of the mc. It comedy is gold! The mc is not too op. He always find himself in death door(he also not weak. It's that his luck of finding strong foe is splendid!) Overall! This novel deserve more readers and needed to be high rank! Really!? How those this novel not get to the top? Also Mr. Benji rocks!

rapibhousecat
rapibhousecatLv10

As a big fan of the anti-hero genre I had decent hopes for this story. In the beginning I was patient and let the story slowly (50+ chapters) unfold before getting to the excitement. With only minor complaints about translation quality I was hooked for hundreds of chapters. I've seen people mention this has comedy but I've never noticed anything funny in the entire story. It's action with a couple failed attempts at comedy very early on. This is a story about a man that travels across time and space to suddenly wake up in a different body in a different world. Yea, that last sentence means almost nothing in this story. He wakes up confused then gets on with his new life. Author didn't even bother with a real back story. The Good: This story can be very entertaining at times. There are a lot of battles; sometimes with magic, sometimes wits, and sometimes just regular brawling. Our main character can be cold and ruthless for most of the story. Later on his personality changes a bit because his responsibilities change. Although I don't personally like how big the difference is but I do appreciate the author trying to evolve him over the story. Lastly there is a lot of different mysterious powers to keep you in eager anticipation for the first half of the story. The Bad: Almost every side character is completely 2D. The author does not spend any time fleshing out anyone besides the main character. The originally useless System (yes he names it The System) powers up over the story and kind of ruins the feeling that our main character is smart when every few paragraphs he's asking The System to think for him. After hearing The System explain to him and advise him he will tell it to repeat itself in ******r words. Then he will- A: Repeat exactly what the system told him to others around himself to sound smart. B: Still not understand, get angry and attack The System. C: Ignore it and do what he wants regardless of the danger or consequences clearly coming despite it being right every single time. The Ugly: The translation. The actual world geography. The number of enemies. The names of characters. The incompetence of every country other than the enemy. I wont go into spoiler details on the last one but read on if you want to know how bad this story gets in the later half. The translation of this story will lead you to question many things. In the beginning I was fine reading it but the later half has become broken sentences that you must think about to try and understand. Beyond the terrible sentence structure, the translators sometimes throws out things like "shallow yet deep" describing a cut. That's a real example to expect almost every chapter later on. I have to assume this is machine translated with a non-English speaking editor for the later half. The geography is confusing as distances and travel time seem to vary greatly as the story goes on. Sometimes it may take our main character days of travel flying at high speeds and other times hours to go to and from the same place. Other times it will seem that regular foot soldiers have the ability to teleport across the continent. Despite describing the countries directions I still have no idea the actual shape of the continent. We only get a vague sense of something being north or south, east or west. The number of enemies that our main character kills escalates quickly in the later half of the story. Thousands will die in seconds yet this never seems to actually effect the enemy. There are always many more enemies no matter how many thousands die. I'm talking about human enemies that have a special power that not just anybody has. They need to grow up and receive special training. Somehow they are in limitless supply to the point that they are best described as a never ending horde. Every country besides the enemy country is pathetic. They are powerless and only really concerned with making sure none of their neighbors gets stronger than them. The enemy will invade them repeatedly with only our main character able to stand against them. Last but probably the most glaring issue that I've ever seen in any Chinese web novel series is this stories characters names. This should go under translation issues but it is so bad that I made it separate. It's understandable to occasionally get mixed up or a new translator/editor makes name changes but this... From chapter to chapter the characters names will not only change but the wrong characters name will appear in place of it. You will often wonder how so-and-so suddenly is back in the story only to realize it's a different character but the translator or editor forgot/ didn't notice/ doesn't care. I say doesn't care because these have been pointed out repeatedly over months with no effort to fix. Overall I do recommend this story. I've enjoyed it enough that it was worth the read. Such a shame that poor translation makes the later half drop in quality. As of chapter 745 the author has kind of written himself into a bind and is just pulling out whatever to keep the story going but I recommend the first few hundred chapters for anyone looking to read a magical action story.

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