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lesserWrath
lesserWrathLv57yr
2017-08-30 21:01

just what chapter does this sht start? just within 10 chapters theres a filler already.. -.-" shts adding more frustration because of that shtty system.. and the story says that he brought him his computer and celphone but why is it now an artificial intelligence... huh... (if theres something wrong or i miss please correct me cause this is just frustrating to read)

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Wallflower
WallflowerLv6

I am confused too Hishiroooooon

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Shyboy
ShyboyLv4

Verge of dropping, I had to pause at 20 and pay attention to reviews and see if it got some action because it's tiring to see mc never get one right. Fudge to masos who like mc struggling forever and not moving a inch. I like the quick witted mc but the author doesn't make worthwhile what he does.

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KingBiBiK
KingBiBiKLv13

Stupid comic stuff ruins the other wise potential story. The only thing that made me laugh is in Ch40+ when the AI switched his mage training memory with jerking off lol.

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LaoTze
LaoTzeLv14

I got out after slogging through to chapter 3. the cutesy humor, the freaking annoying System, and the disjointed writing made me assume this was a japanese novel until I remembered it's on QI.

Daoist_The_Noob
Daoist_The_NoobLv5

i already drop this around 20+ chapter.. sigh

Dude
DudeLv4

This is actually a comedy and a parody of the genre, not an another OP MC wank fantasy. Someone should probably put the tags up there.

CasualReaderSect
CasualReaderSectLv13

So frustrated with this annoying System that keeps on rambling like a 4 years old child. Sigh

chitatos
chitatosLv4

... ITS so confusing than doa arithmetich math

Freelance_r
Freelance_rLv14

I was also confused lol

Freelance_r
Freelance_rLv14

I dropped and came back since I got more chapters now

Shyboy:Verge of dropping, I had to pause at 20 and pay attention to reviews and see if it got some action because it's tiring to see mc never get one right. Fudge to masos who like mc struggling forever and not moving a inch. I like the quick witted mc but the author doesn't make worthwhile what he does.
Shyboy
ShyboyLv4

Did u get news if this get better?

Freelance_r:I dropped and came back since I got more chapters now
Freelance_r
Freelance_rLv14

Someone told me it's gets better later on.. but have to get to it 😑😑

Shyboy:Did u get news if this get better?
Zatana
ZatanaLv14

You know stories with systems and op dudes/gals with actions? Recommend pls

Dude:This is actually a comedy and a parody of the genre, not an another OP MC wank fantasy. Someone should probably put the tags up there.
MTbooksgreatweight
MTbooksgreatweightLv5

literally chap 150 but im at like chp 565 its just loong. yeah filler but it might feel op plz nerf with his start point. its more plotting and junk, and plots dont end as planned for this mc, usually, he also gets a cold caculative mc trait where he learns torture to make dedicated preist and spies spill the beans after around 40 mins while leaving them a pale husk with seemingly no injuries, just....a lot of build up to that point, but it doesnt rlly keep in suspense all the while for a little subplot just,,...stuff happens i guess =/ 20 chaps in is the escape, 50 chaps in is political junk with basically powerless mc cultivating while being forced around and junk......not sure but 100 chaps about he escapes the country and this is after, im not sure maybe half a year of preperation and 3 months traveling through a underground passage. (secret tunnel~ secret tunnel~ secret secret secret tunnel~ . oh wait no thats just the capital... then he has to get through the great wall of china enhanced with light magic for generations with around 20 townsfolk who happened to learn magic. then~ ..he goes around leading revolutions and junk purging church scum from other countries, and occasionly being slightly deified...for a few minutes till they come to thier senses lol. so to ur question, sht happens if u mean a title drop around 150 maybe when he gets crucified for being framed as a homosexual and burned at the stake and causes a flood(which kills no one except a few pets actualy =w=....oh no ;w;) cuz politics is dum.

Baejjjke
BaejjjkeLv5

its good when u reach 100+ ch, and AI not annoying anymore..

yShyboy
yShyboyLv3

She stop repplying the mc or downright disappeared? Comedy parody novels is all right but a navi 'hey listinh' is already enough but a annoying character with a whole lot of lines and vocabulary made it a lot worse.

Baejjjke:its good when u reach 100+ ch, and AI not annoying anymore..
akunax
akunaxLv15

Dropped by 10 ch

NovelBeast
NovelBeastLv4

Nice

eatestunu
eatestunuLv5

You should probably attemt to read further than chapter 10. It's a slow development granted, but it has its good parts

crismerin
crismerinLv5

c

Other Reviews
Division
DivisionLv4

This story is hilarious. Ok, so maybe it's got a "witty AI clichĂ©." But this is not a "system," alright? It doesn't level up, it doesn't give missions, it doesn't analyze any components or anything. It doesn't make reality into a game. So it doesn't really match the clichĂ©. Ok, so other than the AI clichĂ©, there's the "Church vs Mage" clichĂ©. Well... that's true. Not sure what to say about that for now, it's still too soon to see. So I've given World Background three stars. (As of Chapter 20.) And there's the "reincarnation" clichĂ©. Also true. And to make it worse, he reincarnates into a useless young master! But... firstly, most of those novels have the young master die in peace, usually with allies around or in their bedroom. Secondly, it's usually either some hidden plot or an accident. Finally, they have their former identity's memories to aid them. Not so here. He's still in the middle of danger, no memories whatsoever, and had to use his wits to escape. In my humble opinion, this novel has been done really well. So far, the aspects that have made the most impact on me have been the humor and the relationships. The MC is the perfect example of the average guy, which is actually the most impactful type of MC. He even reads webnovels, just like us! So relatable! To quote an Honest Trailer video, "he steals the show just by reacting to stuff." On the more serious side, though, are the relationships. First, the interactions between the MC and the mages and Church. This is a game of outwitting one another. MC's unreliable narrator side comes in here to draw the reader into the plot and then trick them. It's quite effective. Being drawn into one of MC's delusions and thinking that it's actually happening, until something so unbelievable happens that you're like, "Wait, what? That's too eas— ohhhh." Second, the deeper relationships. So far I'd say I've seen only a few of these. However, while both may be clichĂ©s (whore/savior, mother/son), both were lovingly written. Annie's character, especially, was just tragic. Finally, I would like to address the two extremes of reviews that have shown up on this novel. One person has left a one star review due to his dissatisfaction with QI. Several others have tried to offset this by rating five stars meaninglessly. I think both of these reviews are harmful and should be edited or removed. Neither are subjective ratings of the quality of the novel itself. Okay, I've said my piece. Now you should go read this.

Io3ol_TheGoat
Io3ol_TheGoatLv4

[Review after reading Chapter 305] Thy read shall be blessed with laughter. For this novel has no freaking so cliché mc. Were the mc give obvious reasoning and get praise like a genus or an mc said to be average but think like a mad man. The MC cheat were useless at first then get better. It has the recording skill stuff. But his system has unique personality. The system don't give quest and rewards. It's just like video recorder & editor with personality that annoys the user. The world building is Great(4/5). We discover the mystery of the world together with the mc. The world the mc has been teleported has its mystery. The author gives us the different world information/view of different group/individual about the world and which it becomes a puzzle piece which the mc have to put together correctly. As I said(write) earlier we also will solve this puzzle together with the mc(well it's not like we can help him solve it. What I mean is that we solve the puzzle by following the idea of the mc or not(and it's also fun to do it. It's healthy for your brain!)) so basically we have think which is the right info about the world. With the more hidden mystery being uncovered about the world. It started ****** with the curch world info to mage world info to then which another source of world info. The mc is average in which we can relate. The development of the story was smooth and make ones want to read more(I don't know about the other people). It's a story of out smarting one another. The enemy of the mc us not just the cliché church but more and different enemys. And lastly! It also funny. With the interaction of the characters in which is realistic(in which I like) and it also funny. The system is no boring system. The system and the mc is like(?) partners. They help each other to survive! With the system funny commentary about the event that is happening mix with the reaction of the mc. It comedy is gold! The mc is not too op. He always find himself in death door(he also not weak. It's that his luck of finding strong foe is splendid!) Overall! This novel deserve more readers and needed to be high rank! Really!? How those this novel not get to the top? Also Mr. Benji rocks!

rapibhousecat
rapibhousecatLv10

As a big fan of the anti-hero genre I had decent hopes for this story. In the beginning I was patient and let the story slowly (50+ chapters) unfold before getting to the excitement. With only minor complaints about translation quality I was hooked for hundreds of chapters. I've seen people mention this has comedy but I've never noticed anything funny in the entire story. It's action with a couple failed attempts at comedy very early on. This is a story about a man that travels across time and space to suddenly wake up in a different body in a different world. Yea, that last sentence means almost nothing in this story. He wakes up confused then gets on with his new life. Author didn't even bother with a real back story. The Good: This story can be very entertaining at times. There are a lot of battles; sometimes with magic, sometimes wits, and sometimes just regular brawling. Our main character can be cold and ruthless for most of the story. Later on his personality changes a bit because his responsibilities change. Although I don't personally like how big the difference is but I do appreciate the author trying to evolve him over the story. Lastly there is a lot of different mysterious powers to keep you in eager anticipation for the first half of the story. The Bad: Almost every side character is completely 2D. The author does not spend any time fleshing out anyone besides the main character. The originally useless System (yes he names it The System) powers up over the story and kind of ruins the feeling that our main character is smart when every few paragraphs he's asking The System to think for him. After hearing The System explain to him and advise him he will tell it to repeat itself in ******r words. Then he will- A: Repeat exactly what the system told him to others around himself to sound smart. B: Still not understand, get angry and attack The System. C: Ignore it and do what he wants regardless of the danger or consequences clearly coming despite it being right every single time. The Ugly: The translation. The actual world geography. The number of enemies. The names of characters. The incompetence of every country other than the enemy. I wont go into spoiler details on the last one but read on if you want to know how bad this story gets in the later half. The translation of this story will lead you to question many things. In the beginning I was fine reading it but the later half has become broken sentences that you must think about to try and understand. Beyond the terrible sentence structure, the translators sometimes throws out things like "shallow yet deep" describing a cut. That's a real example to expect almost every chapter later on. I have to assume this is machine translated with a non-English speaking editor for the later half. The geography is confusing as distances and travel time seem to vary greatly as the story goes on. Sometimes it may take our main character days of travel flying at high speeds and other times hours to go to and from the same place. Other times it will seem that regular foot soldiers have the ability to teleport across the continent. Despite describing the countries directions I still have no idea the actual shape of the continent. We only get a vague sense of something being north or south, east or west. The number of enemies that our main character kills escalates quickly in the later half of the story. Thousands will die in seconds yet this never seems to actually effect the enemy. There are always many more enemies no matter how many thousands die. I'm talking about human enemies that have a special power that not just anybody has. They need to grow up and receive special training. Somehow they are in limitless supply to the point that they are best described as a never ending horde. Every country besides the enemy country is pathetic. They are powerless and only really concerned with making sure none of their neighbors gets stronger than them. The enemy will invade them repeatedly with only our main character able to stand against them. Last but probably the most glaring issue that I've ever seen in any Chinese web novel series is this stories characters names. This should go under translation issues but it is so bad that I made it separate. It's understandable to occasionally get mixed up or a new translator/editor makes name changes but this... From chapter to chapter the characters names will not only change but the wrong characters name will appear in place of it. You will often wonder how so-and-so suddenly is back in the story only to realize it's a different character but the translator or editor forgot/ didn't notice/ doesn't care. I say doesn't care because these have been pointed out repeatedly over months with no effort to fix. Overall I do recommend this story. I've enjoyed it enough that it was worth the read. Such a shame that poor translation makes the later half drop in quality. As of chapter 745 the author has kind of written himself into a bind and is just pulling out whatever to keep the story going but I recommend the first few hundred chapters for anyone looking to read a magical action story.

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