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IcyTurtleLv127yr
2017-07-10 08:13

Here is my review after reading 189 chapters : MC have a lot of broken skills, know everything in the game (boss skill, dungeon environment, future event) with excuse as 'beta player' and MC is the only 'beta player' in the game so far and no one in his party care about something like that, they just follow MC command like trained dog and ask him everything about the game. Even the game company don't care about MC, they should be atleast suspicious but they just don't care at all. Someone in MC party always make boring dirty joke, there are 2 money grubber who love to hoard every items and money as much as possible eventhough they are filthy rich, MC meet 2 new member (1 with 'perfect leg', the other one is another *** joke lover). Author always talking about how sexy and big boob the healer in party, and keep creating pointless argument againt each character with end result as dry humor, mostly *** joke humor then everyone laugh like middle school boys. Female MC protagonist which never appear again after 1st appear in early chapter with short introduction. Dumb and idiot antagonist so far, there is 1 rival guild who hate MC, and the Guild Master from tha guild always know how to make fun of himself like idiot, he is so shameless as well. Story so far mostly doing dungeon run, gathering materials, errand boy, there is no notable story. Even the main quest which MC got only doing dungeon run and kill boss in the dungeon. Game world itself never get explain so far, so I don't know how big the world is or what place in the game world. MC rarely do anything in real world.

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RuminatorLv2

If you looked at the story closely you'll see that the Company is very questionable to the MC, they even went and tried sabotaging the MC by announcing what floor he was in the Land Lease Quest. Something that is considered very unprofessional. They even nerfed the Guardian Class to halt the MCs progress and here you are saying that the Game Company is just turninga blind eye. Do your research first please.

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IcyTurtleLv12

1st The company already plan to nerf the guardian class (MC said that, but it got rush few months earlier, so there is not much different). 2nd Do you even know the rule about Land Lease Quest? there is no rule which say game company won't announce something and MC is already far ahead other player, so it won't be interesting if he is just take all the boss himself and left everyone in dust since what's the point if you got nothing? no boss, no loot, so game comp try to give another player a chance to beat MC since he take all the boss already except the last one.

Ruminator:If you looked at the story closely you'll see that the Company is very questionable to the MC, they even went and tried sabotaging the MC by announcing what floor he was in the Land Lease Quest. Something that is considered very unprofessional. They even nerfed the Guardian Class to halt the MCs progress and here you are saying that the Game Company is just turninga blind eye. Do your research first please.
IcyTurtleLv12

And what about MC broken skill, overly used *** joke, greedy money grubber, stupid rival guild, MC who know everything? there are too many bad thing than the good one.

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RuminatorLv2

And using your logic then if a top tier player is too good then they should just announce everything they do? Your logic doesn't make any sense. I'm also baffled why you're here if you hate this novel so much. And you even replied to my comment with such hostility. Someone like you just want some attention or make people hate this novel I guess. Either way, lighten up dude it's just a novel. No piece of writing is perfect. If you want to enjoy life appreciate what's in front of you instead of looking for something that is clearly not there.

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IcyTurtleLv12

You know, I read 189 chapter before create my review because I want to like this novel, but in the end it disappointed me. MC is more than too good, he is op. His broken skill is just outright cheating (0 defense, reset all skill cd 30 mins, move to another world (hijack chapter) to avoid being hit, 1st to have rare mount and servant/pet with skill to make MC invisible for 5 secs. Yes, I hate a lot of character in this novel like the fatty with his boring joke, 2 sister with their greedy nature, so if you ask me the character development was terrible, the story was flat (main story so far only grinding material for ghost girl and kill necro boss in dungeon) and mostly only tell about how MC and his party always be number one in every dungeon because he is the only beta player.

Ruminator:And using your logic then if a top tier player is too good then they should just announce everything they do? Your logic doesn't make any sense. I'm also baffled why you're here if you hate this novel so much. And you even replied to my comment with such hostility. Someone like you just want some attention or make people hate this novel I guess. Either way, lighten up dude it's just a novel. No piece of writing is perfect. If you want to enjoy life appreciate what's in front of you instead of looking for something that is clearly not there.
LazyBoyLv6

Which MC isn't cheating? Tell me and introduce me to one. Without anything special on MC, he is not qualified to be MC. Duh

IcyTurtle:You know, I read 189 chapter before create my review because I want to like this novel, but in the end it disappointed me. MC is more than too good, he is op. His broken skill is just outright cheating (0 defense, reset all skill cd 30 mins, move to another world (hijack chapter) to avoid being hit, 1st to have rare mount and servant/pet with skill to make MC invisible for 5 secs. Yes, I hate a lot of character in this novel like the fatty with his boring joke, 2 sister with their greedy nature, so if you ask me the character development was terrible, the story was flat (main story so far only grinding material for ghost girl and kill necro boss in dungeon) and mostly only tell about how MC and his party always be number one in every dungeon because he is the only beta player.
LazyBoyLv6

Just leave the attention freak somewhere around the corner, far from your mind. Forget about them

Ruminator:If you looked at the story closely you'll see that the Company is very questionable to the MC, they even went and tried sabotaging the MC by announcing what floor he was in the Land Lease Quest. Something that is considered very unprofessional. They even nerfed the Guardian Class to halt the MCs progress and here you are saying that the Game Company is just turninga blind eye. Do your research first please.
WindReaderLv6

Well from this review, I remember similar novel about mmorpg or vrmmorpg. If you read vrmmorpg maybe try Legendary Moonlight scultor (Korea), Praise The Orc (Korea), Reign Of the Hunter (China). If mmorpg maybe try The King Avatar (China) it's really good novel about pro player game cuz the genre more like slice of life too.

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Calm_SpiritLv4

If a player continuously knows things about the game in advance especially when no other beta player shows any signs of knowing, the company should be suspicious, for example, before even fighting the boss he already prepared the key item and this doesnt only happen once, to me that is plain bull. Another thing that got me ticked off is his insane luck like author give the other characters a chance plz, every skill or mount that has any meaning to him he gets. Im very frustrated with this.

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IcyTurtleLv12

Finally someone with same mind, someone who can think before writing and cursing like idiot.

Calm_Spirit:If a player continuously knows things about the game in advance especially when no other beta player shows any signs of knowing, the company should be suspicious, for example, before even fighting the boss he already prepared the key item and this doesnt only happen once, to me that is plain bull. Another thing that got me ticked off is his insane luck like author give the other characters a chance plz, every skill or mount that has any meaning to him he gets. Im very frustrated with this.
Horn_Dog_SectLv6

I think this novel is bullsh*t, but I like bull****, so here I'm waiting for more chapters e.e I enjoy the chapters were the MC is alone doing his things, and I hate the ones with the little bitc*, I mean, a dog eated half of her brain, she's just stupid, but what can I do? Just kepp reading.

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IcyTurtleLv12

You can just read other novel, ******.

Horn_Dog_Sect:I think this novel is bullsh*t, but I like bull****, so here I'm waiting for more chapters e.e I enjoy the chapters were the MC is alone doing his things, and I hate the ones with the little bitc*, I mean, a dog eated half of her brain, she's just stupid, but what can I do? Just kepp reading.
IcyTurtleLv12

What a weird sensor, I can't write sim ple without spacebar.

Horn_Dog_Sect:I think this novel is bullsh*t, but I like bull****, so here I'm waiting for more chapters e.e I enjoy the chapters were the MC is alone doing his things, and I hate the ones with the little bitc*, I mean, a dog eated half of her brain, she's just stupid, but what can I do? Just kepp reading.
ReAveLv4

u guys should read the synopsis and story (early chap) clearly... in previous live he pro player and then got reincarnated so its make sense if he know everything -_- and the female lead got in game after 2 or 3 years later after game release same as him in previous live.... so read clearly before u judge ....

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ReAveLv4

and 1 more, if u read CN Novel most of MC are OP MC... so dont read CN novel if u dont like OP MC

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NekoNekoLv6

I agree 100% with you. And here is one I recommend to you: Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed The World It's pretty good. At least better than this story. Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed The World: - No harem. - Clever MC. (Not stupid like this MC) - MC doesn't have have broken skills, he use tactics and his own skills to win. ( at least he dorsn't has some now, need translator to translat further chapter to know)

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Genocidal_SoulLv3

I wasn't planning on reading this after that synopsis, but now I changed my mind because of this review. Pfffft! I am going to love this novel

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IcyTurtleLv12

You don't understand the point of my review don't you? ******ton...

ReAve:u guys should read the synopsis and story (early chap) clearly... in previous live he pro player and then got reincarnated so its make sense if he know everything -_- and the female lead got in game after 2 or 3 years later after game release same as him in previous live.... so read clearly before u judge ....
ReAveLv4

huh? you complain about brokenn skill (OP skill/MC ) , know everything in the game.. thats my reasoning... about boring dirty joke or money gruber charac etc its just depend on your taste which i wont deny or agree... even i agree about boring dirty joke with u but still, i can ignore something like that...

IcyTurtle:You don't understand the point of my review don't you? ******ton...
IcyTurtleLv12

There is a limit where you can't be too OP to the point it make the novel so boring without any challenge. He got so many broken skill yet the other player never got a chance to do so as well. Author was rather one-minded that his MC should be as broken as possible and make the antagonist as bad as possible which is rather shallow story we got here because of that.

ReAve:huh? you complain about brokenn skill (OP skill/MC ) , know everything in the game.. thats my reasoning... about boring dirty joke or money gruber charac etc its just depend on your taste which i wont deny or agree... even i agree about boring dirty joke with u but still, i can ignore something like that...
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PkbwgscLv4

It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up. The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders. However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes. Overall, not bad. Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular. It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.

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