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Pkbwgsc
PkbwgscLv47yr
2017-07-05 05:50

It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up. The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders. However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes. Overall, not bad. Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular. It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.

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Thanatos277
Thanatos277Lv15

Insulting each other is how me and my friends do it lol

sassyangel
sassyangelLv13

Gueux
GueuxLv5

yes

Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

Chris_Cummings_5379
Chris_Cummings_5379Lv1

So what you are really saying is you are a piece of garbage with no friends

Thanatos277:Insulting each other is how me and my friends do it lol
LazyBoy
LazyBoyLv6

do you have nothing to do, other than commenting on things that are 4 years old 🤦‍♂️ were you too young 4 years ago to comment or even have a phone? chill, and stop being toxic kiddo

Chris_Cummings_5379:So what you are really saying is you are a piece of garbage with no friends
Chris_Cummings_5379
Chris_Cummings_5379Lv1

lol, thinking that reading something later than others has any kind of negative meaning. there are 10's of thousands of stories here, im sorry you have nothing better to do in your lifw then read wvery single one two days after they come out. i have friends and other thing that constitute life. Yes i can be as toxic as i want, they want money for their story, i want them to write like they at least know what a brain is.

LazyBoy:do you have nothing to do, other than commenting on things that are 4 years old 🤦‍♂️ were you too young 4 years ago to comment or even have a phone? chill, and stop being toxic kiddo
Immortal_Obesity
Immortal_ObesityLv5

3 years old*

LazyBoy:do you have nothing to do, other than commenting on things that are 4 years old 🤦‍♂️ were you too young 4 years ago to comment or even have a phone? chill, and stop being toxic kiddo
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IcyTurtle
IcyTurtleLv12

Here is my review after reading 189 chapters : MC have a lot of broken skills, know everything in the game (boss skill, dungeon environment, future event) with excuse as 'beta player' and MC is the only 'beta player' in the game so far and no one in his party care about something like that, they just follow MC command like trained dog and ask him everything about the game. Even the game company don't care about MC, they should be atleast suspicious but they just don't care at all. Someone in MC party always make boring dirty joke, there are 2 money grubber who love to hoard every items and money as much as possible eventhough they are filthy rich, MC meet 2 new member (1 with 'perfect leg', the other one is another *** joke lover). Author always talking about how sexy and big boob the healer in party, and keep creating pointless argument againt each character with end result as dry humor, mostly *** joke humor then everyone laugh like middle school boys. Female MC protagonist which never appear again after 1st appear in early chapter with short introduction. Dumb and idiot antagonist so far, there is 1 rival guild who hate MC, and the Guild Master from tha guild always know how to make fun of himself like idiot, he is so shameless as well. Story so far mostly doing dungeon run, gathering materials, errand boy, there is no notable story. Even the main quest which MC got only doing dungeon run and kill boss in the dungeon. Game world itself never get explain so far, so I don't know how big the world is or what place in the game world. MC rarely do anything in real world.

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