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Rinkou
RinkouLv47yr
2017-06-21 12:44

It started out good, the plot quickly took place and I like how there isn't any filler chapters. However, after a while, it gets repetitive. Going for dungeons, protagonist explaining the strategy, team wipe, etc. To be honest, the characters are plain annoying, especially how the author makes all the female characters soooo annoying. And makes them all having nice figures and whatever, it makes me disappointed and mad. The characters are the ones turning me away from this story, they are so cliche and annoying. Why does the author make all the female characters so stupid? The only female character that hasn't made a bad impression on me is the guild master of the all-girls guild. Geez. Thanks for all the hard work, translators and author.

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anjan011
anjan011Lv13

all novels have to repeat the sequences. just with new character and new background. A novel that spans 1000+ chapters can not avoid this fate. also regarding female characters, the female readers seems to scoff at them, but for male readers its interesting xD

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Rinkou
RinkouLv4

I know, the repeated sequences are unavoidable. What's really killing my interest for this story is the female characters. I admire the readers who can put up with them, maybe I'll give this story another try next time :X.

anjan011:all novels have to repeat the sequences. just with new character and new background. A novel that spans 1000+ chapters can not avoid this fate. also regarding female characters, the female readers seems to scoff at them, but for male readers its interesting xD
Wandering_Traveler
Wandering_TravelerLv11

Why did you say that the author make all the women stupid? all i see is different people with different personality. Some are stupid and i'm not denying that, but why did you said that ALL of them are stupid?

Rinkou:I know, the repeated sequences are unavoidable. What's really killing my interest for this story is the female characters. I admire the readers who can put up with them, maybe I'll give this story another try next time :X.
mmcan
mmcanLv1

The latest chapters is pretty nice you know, I mean, the mc really killed someone!

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Rinkou
RinkouLv4

So far, I only found one of them not stupid, not all, my bad. I don't really see a difference in their personality *shrugs*, you do but I don't. I'm a girl, and I don't talk with my friends like how the female characters do. Their dialogue with one another is so... ridiculous! One of them has a such a bad sense of direction, which I know it's meant to be a joke or gag, but I don't find it funny, sorry.

Wandering_Traveler:Why did you say that the author make all the women stupid? all i see is different people with different personality. Some are stupid and i'm not denying that, but why did you said that ALL of them are stupid?
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Oh no, I have no issues with the mc or the plot. It's the female harem and female characters that makes it unbearable to read on sometimes. But I'll give it a try sometime later :)

mmcan:The latest chapters is pretty nice you know, I mean, the mc really killed someone!
Wandering_Traveler
Wandering_TravelerLv11

I guess it's like you are watching someone doing stupid things for fun, but you only thing that is stupid? well, everyone has their own taste so i guess you aren't wrong.

Rinkou:So far, I only found one of them not stupid, not all, my bad. I don't really see a difference in their personality *shrugs*, you do but I don't. I'm a girl, and I don't talk with my friends like how the female characters do. Their dialogue with one another is so... ridiculous! One of them has a such a bad sense of direction, which I know it's meant to be a joke or gag, but I don't find it funny, sorry.
mmcan
mmcanLv1

😊

Rinkou:Oh no, I have no issues with the mc or the plot. It's the female harem and female characters that makes it unbearable to read on sometimes. But I'll give it a try sometime later :)
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Yeah, I don't want to go into a rant, I guess my sense of humour isn't the same :X. Thank you for understanding, sorry if I came off as rude or bitchy, didn't mean to sound that way ><.

Wandering_Traveler:I guess it's like you are watching someone doing stupid things for fun, but you only thing that is stupid? well, everyone has their own taste so i guess you aren't wrong.
asnow
asnowLv12

I agree though.. im getting quite irritated by the female characters as well.. they have such 1 dimensional personality and their speech patterns are impossibly cringe..

Rinkou:Yeah, I don't want to go into a rant, I guess my sense of humour isn't the same :X. Thank you for understanding, sorry if I came off as rude or bitchy, didn't mean to sound that way ><.
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Yeah, exactly! Finally someone who sees it the way I do :x

asnow:I agree though.. im getting quite irritated by the female characters as well.. they have such 1 dimensional personality and their speech patterns are impossibly cringe..
asnow
asnowLv12

Like if one or two characters did it it might be a bit funny as a joke but theyre all irritating..

Rinkou:Yeah, exactly! Finally someone who sees it the way I do :x
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Yeah, at first I found it alright. But after that, it started annoying me. Glad to know you know how I feel, haha.

asnow:Like if one or two characters did it it might be a bit funny as a joke but theyre all irritating..
asnow
asnowLv12

Ive stopped reading this one for now but lemme know if it gets better x)

Rinkou:Yeah, at first I found it alright. But after that, it started annoying me. Glad to know you know how I feel, haha.
C00LCALmC0LLected
C00LCALmC0LLectedLv15

I understand how you feel, I'm in the same boat right now only reading it because it's quick and I hope it will get better.

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Wandering_Traveler
Wandering_TravelerLv11

Nah, it's ok. I just found it's weird when you said female characters are all stupid

Rinkou:Yeah, I don't want to go into a rant, I guess my sense of humour isn't the same :X. Thank you for understanding, sorry if I came off as rude or bitchy, didn't mean to sound that way ><.
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Sure, no problem ^^!

asnow:Ive stopped reading this one for now but lemme know if it gets better x)
Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Thanks for understanding, hopefully it will get better :X!

C00LCALmC0LLected:I understand how you feel, I'm in the same boat right now only reading it because it's quick and I hope it will get better.
Sars
SarsLv4

Started good then went down hill. Just like Yamcha. The little girl is the most annoying. The main party gets good stuff too much and the gap between them and others gets too unbalanced. It started good, really good.

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Rinkou
RinkouLv4

Yeah, the starting got me hooked. I loved it! But then, more female characters were introduced and then, it started to get annoying to read the story. The conversations between the characters are really dumb to me, so I couldn't read on further, no matter how hard I tried to bear it.

Sars:Started good then went down hill. Just like Yamcha. The little girl is the most annoying. The main party gets good stuff too much and the gap between them and others gets too unbalanced. It started good, really good.
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IcyTurtle
IcyTurtleLv12

Here is my review after reading 189 chapters : MC have a lot of broken skills, know everything in the game (boss skill, dungeon environment, future event) with excuse as 'beta player' and MC is the only 'beta player' in the game so far and no one in his party care about something like that, they just follow MC command like trained dog and ask him everything about the game. Even the game company don't care about MC, they should be atleast suspicious but they just don't care at all. Someone in MC party always make boring dirty joke, there are 2 money grubber who love to hoard every items and money as much as possible eventhough they are filthy rich, MC meet 2 new member (1 with 'perfect leg', the other one is another *** joke lover). Author always talking about how sexy and big boob the healer in party, and keep creating pointless argument againt each character with end result as dry humor, mostly *** joke humor then everyone laugh like middle school boys. Female MC protagonist which never appear again after 1st appear in early chapter with short introduction. Dumb and idiot antagonist so far, there is 1 rival guild who hate MC, and the Guild Master from tha guild always know how to make fun of himself like idiot, he is so shameless as well. Story so far mostly doing dungeon run, gathering materials, errand boy, there is no notable story. Even the main quest which MC got only doing dungeon run and kill boss in the dungeon. Game world itself never get explain so far, so I don't know how big the world is or what place in the game world. MC rarely do anything in real world.

Pkbwgsc
PkbwgscLv4

It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up. The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders. However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes. Overall, not bad. Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular. It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.

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