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ACHILLESLv44mth
2024-10-22 00:44

look its an alright fic, My main problem is Mc personality and then him being buddy with issei like good pal always trying to help him. Writting was good the character(mc is an downer).

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EinlionAuthor

Vahn has a very tragic past which will be revealed as he delves deeper into the Corridor.

GyroJapsterLv4

I've seen enough Issei bashing in Fanfiction, ao3, webnovels. Literally thousands of them without reading the Light Novel on why he's likable. Be original.

Passing_ThroughLv14

It normal for trash to dislike gold. The way they deliver a comment is like an npc.

GyroJapster:I've seen enough Issei bashing in Fanfiction, ao3, webnovels. Literally thousands of them without reading the Light Novel on why he's likable. Be original.
ACHILLESLv4

💀💀what's likeable about him ur goofy🤣

GyroJapster:I've seen enough Issei bashing in Fanfiction, ao3, webnovels. Literally thousands of them without reading the Light Novel on why he's likable. Be original.
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boxessssssLv4

Ok being honest it's far from the worst thing to read on webnovel. But it's a sequel to epic which means I've gone into this looking for the same feelings I got in the first chapters of epic which was full of cool powers and great fights, before dropping into a 50/50 smut/story mix after chapter 100ish from memory which is where my interest became a lot more lacklustre. Now trying not to spoil much, the outright lemons are dialed back about 80% or more but that's just them being replaced by fade to blacks and such, as a trade off vahn has already got an expansive group gunning for his bed in the first 20 chapters and it just gets worse from there. The powers are much less creatively shown as of this point in the story, there's not a whole lot of true developmental struggle for vahn in the slightest, not a single fight that I can even remember so far (if they've even been written out in favour of the fic being packed for of honestly awful romance) unlike a number I can still recall from the original to this day (e.g. the solo Rex fight). I'm tempted to mark this as spoiler purely because the plot so far is vahn walks into a room/area, flirting/foreplay ensues, gloss over anything else plausibly interesting and onto the next scene. It's rather disappointing from a writer where I've seen the heights they started from and was genuinely interested to see that quality come back but I haven't seen it yet. I'll keep reading as long as the flicker of hope I have lasts but I do not recommend this at all for people looking for a halfway creative or interesting fanfic cause I can no longer trust that you would find it.

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