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boxessssssLv44mth
2024-10-15 12:03

Ok being honest it's far from the worst thing to read on webnovel. But it's a sequel to epic which means I've gone into this looking for the same feelings I got in the first chapters of epic which was full of cool powers and great fights, before dropping into a 50/50 smut/story mix after chapter 100ish from memory which is where my interest became a lot more lacklustre. Now trying not to spoil much, the outright lemons are dialed back about 80% or more but that's just them being replaced by fade to blacks and such, as a trade off vahn has already got an expansive group gunning for his bed in the first 20 chapters and it just gets worse from there. The powers are much less creatively shown as of this point in the story, there's not a whole lot of true developmental struggle for vahn in the slightest, not a single fight that I can even remember so far (if they've even been written out in favour of the fic being packed for of honestly awful romance) unlike a number I can still recall from the original to this day (e.g. the solo Rex fight). I'm tempted to mark this as spoiler purely because the plot so far is vahn walks into a room/area, flirting/foreplay ensues, gloss over anything else plausibly interesting and onto the next scene. It's rather disappointing from a writer where I've seen the heights they started from and was genuinely interested to see that quality come back but I haven't seen it yet. I'll keep reading as long as the flicker of hope I have lasts but I do not recommend this at all for people looking for a halfway creative or interesting fanfic cause I can no longer trust that you would find it.

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EinlionAuthor

Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.

boxessssssLv4

No, I quite simply struggle to pay the bus fares to get into uni each week and even on the weeks I don't, I have other things to pay for. As I said in the review I'll keep reading and we'll see where this goes, I might amend the review at a later date but until then I'll leave this here

Einlion:Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

This review feels as if someone else has put my thoughts to words. Vahn is entirely diffreent and it feels as if u didn't learn anything about story tellying from epic. Vahns a diffrent character.

Einlion:Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.
Kono_TimodaLv3

Hey einlion, why are all the smuts fade to black, will there be full lemihs in the future or is this all we're getting?

Einlion:Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.
Desire96Lv4

What do you think now?

boxessssss:No, I quite simply struggle to pay the bus fares to get into uni each week and even on the weeks I don't, I have other things to pay for. As I said in the review I'll keep reading and we'll see where this goes, I might amend the review at a later date but until then I'll leave this here
Manish_Rathore_5496Lv2

Yup

Kyran_Ambrosius:This review feels as if someone else has put my thoughts to words. Vahn is entirely diffreent and it feels as if u didn't learn anything about story tellying from epic. Vahns a diffrent character.
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

No more lemons? That was literally the only good part of EPIC...

Kono_Timoda:Hey einlion, why are all the smuts fade to black, will there be full lemihs in the future or is this all we're getting?
Arnab_PandayLv2

Mate did u drop ur Mha fanfic? I was having fun in that.

Einlion:Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.
AmataratsulLv15

Ein, EPICs glory days are over, branch out and find that original spark. This just feels like milking a dead horse. You are one of the best authors on this site but seem to have gotten lost in smut like ghostyz

Einlion:Are you up to date on the most recent chapters? You can read up to Chapter 59/60 on my patreon, which is where I've started to focus a bit more on the action.
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