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shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv48mth
2024-09-11 14:32

too early to review but I have to review. first and formost the author have misconception about reatsu. in bleach everyone use reiryoku whenever it needs to be used, reatsu is the weight of the reiryoku that is used. when they said zaraki have massive reatsu it means that his reiryuko is massive. its like a tungsten cube, the cube itself is the reiryuko while its weight is the reatsu. reatsu was never an energy. second this fanfic is familiar I think I have seen this before, or not who knows can't remember. if you still did not get it reiryuko is like an butane gas and the act of turning on the gas stove is the act of a shinigami atempting to use its fuel aka reiryuko for kido, now the fire is burning in the stove that fire is the kido now the heat you feel in the fire is the reatsu. as of now this is the only thing I could say. its still 4 chapters. I will write a review again when it reach 50 chaps if the author made changes accordingly as that would mean I might still read this if not then I wont too.

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DragonnX
DragonnXAuthor

Noted. thank you 🌹

MirageKing
MirageKingLv14

Reiruku= spiritual power Reiatsu = spiritual pressure S.power represents potential of person, whereas S.pressure determines current strength of the person.

shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

reiryoku is the energy of your soul, raishi is building blocks of everything including your soul, while reatsu is the manifestation of your reiryoku. while the defenses of shinigami and arrancar uses reatsu, which could make those who have weaker reatsu have no damage to those with stronger reatsu, when it comes to powering thier Cero, kido, etc it requires reiryoku not reatsu. it was stated in arrancar arc by Yammy Llargo while fighting uryu

MirageKing:Reiruku= spiritual power Reiatsu = spiritual pressure S.power represents potential of person, whereas S.pressure determines current strength of the person.
shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

besides reiryoku is not someone's potential, having large amount of it or low amunt of it can in deed show someones potential but that is not the main thing of reiryuko. reiryoku is translated as spiritual power and spiritual energy, it is the energy itself while the spiritual pressure or reatsu is more of a concept rather than an actual thing it exist solely due to reiryuko. the amount of reiryoku that you are leaking is the amount of reatsu you are showing. if you still believe in your headcanon you should watch the you,tube vid by Radman "reiryuko, reatsu, andraishi explained" I couldn't explain it better than him.

MirageKing:Reiruku= spiritual power Reiatsu = spiritual pressure S.power represents potential of person, whereas S.pressure determines current strength of the person.
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

shipp.?

DragonnX:Noted. thank you 🌹
solo_leveling_god
solo_leveling_godLv4

?????

Haku_Ouroboros:shipp.?
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

MC x (????)

solo_leveling_god:?????
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Romance??

DragonnX:Noted. thank you 🌹
shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

at chapter 49, the story is okay. but I think that ulqiuora's powers is bundled with his nihilistic mind. I mean that what makes ulqiuora is cool and well done partly due to his unique mind. but it is okay, its just that I am currently interested in overlord fics so I might be baised but oh well.

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