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BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv154mth
2024-09-06 03:19

Slight Spoilers. Stop looking now if you don't want to know. Also I finished 72 Chapters and wanted to give my two cents. Chapters 1-72 of Volume 1 is basically the end of the story. Chapters 73 (Volume 2) and onward is basically a new MC. I'm not even joking. I don't have much to say about the MC. He's kind of a wimp or if I had to be nice I'd say he is a wallflower. He gets 3 skills to choose from and you'd think he would use it more wisely but he doesn't. Now I don't want to be rude but in synthesis skill type of novels the Author is the one who makes it work or doesn't. Unfortunately it takes the kid way too long and to top it off he's basically a weakling for a pretty long time. His skill set should be something he can use to make himself overpowered rather quickly. Sadly instead we get what feels like a 12 year old who just hit puberty and lacks some intelligence. I'm not trying to be rude but the MC for the Chapters 1-72 is basically slow. Chapters 73 and onwards on the otherhand. I'll just say it feels like he just got introduced to Linkin Park, Green Day and Paramore and thought wearing mascara and dark clothes made him cool. If you didn't get it he's basically just Edgy. I can't exactly say it's wrong for him to get like that but it certainly feels like we just got introduced to a new Main Character. Right now I can't recommend it to friends. Score: 5.9 Out of 10 Personal Score: N/A. You don't want to know my real Score.

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Dariusthesinister
DariusthesinisterLv1

would you like to read my novel symbiogen ?

BalsamicThunThighs
BalsamicThunThighsLv15

Ill try it. Don't cry if I give you a bad review.

Dariusthesinister:would you like to read my novel symbiogen ?
Dariusthesinister
DariusthesinisterLv1

i wont trust i just want honest review :33

BalsamicThunThighs:Ill try it. Don't cry if I give you a bad review.
sirzechsGlucfier
sirzechsGlucfierLv4

it gets better, character growth and all that

Ranzik
RanzikLv15

This is a perfect synopsis of the story. Would not recommend.

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