BalsamicThunThighs
I'm a book worm whose starting on his own journey of writing his first novel. Will I ever finish it? Definitely, just wait and see.
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BalsamicThunThighs1dCommentedPretty stupid to release a murder photo like that.
The picture showed a girl leaning over a sink with a boy resting on top of her. They were both missing their heads and from the position that they were in, you could tell that they were in the middle of having sex when they were killed! There was blood splattered all over the mirror in front of the sink, and the floor of the bathroom was drenched in blood. The angle of the camera gave the people watching a clear view of the wounds reflected through the mirror, but the news channels blurred out the wounds as they thought it was too gruesome to show on national television.- BalsamicThunThighs1dCommented
Arit should've committed and taken her out. Now we got a side villain origin arc here.
Linda's hand came off her face as she screamed at him, and the man's eyes widened in shock as he got a full view of her scarred and deformed face! There was blood leaking from everywhere, and it mixed with the tears to make her already deformed face look even worse! - BalsamicThunThighs1dCommented
What's with the exclamation marks? Is it supposed to be an excited narration here?
The moon shining down from the sky illuminated the streets of Burgundy Estate located deep within the extravagant and lavish region of City A. The houses in this region were all exquisitely made with beautiful lawns and expensive-looking décor around every corner! The houses were so lavish that you would think the neighbors were all competing with each other to see who could outdo the other person! It was something so petty and stupid that you could only expect it from people who had too much money and did not know what to do with any of it! - BalsamicThunThighs1dCommented
I'm still confused on how a B ranked defensive ability was able to endure a punch from a S ranked physical punch. MC is pretty weak.
Surprisingly, the killer was still able to activate his exoskeleton in the perfect place to protect his body from Mark's punch, but no matter how strong his exoskeleton was, there was nothing that it would do against a punch that had been multiplied exponentially like the Divergent Fist! The killer felt something break inside his body before he was launched like a rag doll into the air! - BalsamicThunThighs1dCommented
What lol
Two thousand years later... - BalsamicThunThighs1dCommentedA total of ten thousand died, but Xie Qing's face was dark. He turned to the crowd and released his Qi.
- BalsamicThunThighs2dCommentedCh 529 A Family To Believe In
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I'm half expecting Rowena to beat him up for the secret only for him to pull the uno reverse card like. 'You killed my mother.'
He murmured, "Honestly... I don't know. I have already decided to tell her everything once our worlds have peace. I will accept whatever she wants to do to me, but I promise that Amelia won't be harmed in any way. I will make sure of it." - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
Ah shoot. Why am I feeling emotional. Stupid onions. I swear I'm making curry right now.
"It's mine as well," Isla said as she joined the embrace, her arms encircling Asher with a mother's love, her own tears streaming down her cheeks. She added, "Even if we were blind and was too late to save you from getting betrayed, we...we should have been there for you even after your death, but we let you down. You must have felt alone in your suffering all this time, and I can't begin to imagine what all you must have gone through to become this. But...we are here for you now, even if you think it's too late." - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
I mean this line isn't exactly wrong
"You should listen to your dad, Amelia. This man reeks of greed and deceit," Isla said with a look of disgust and anger. - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
I mean he does pack a good firearm and has Like 5 ladies (Redhaired miif, Maid, Maid's daughter knight, queen and the one that makes me think of a mermaid princess) plus more incoming.
"W-What? My sweet little pea...You...You like him that much to trust him like that?" Isla interjected, her tone a mixture of surprise and concern as she too examined this young man, and could clearly see that his dangerously charming looks could easily disarm even most strong-willed women. - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
That must be really embarrassing for both parties
"Dad!" Amelia's shriek pierced the air as she scrambled to cover herself, clutching her bra in a desperate bid for modesty while Asher, somewhat caught off guard, could only muster a stumped expression at the sight of Logan standing imposingly at the torn-off door. - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
Lol thank goodness it's not something with Jade, Heavenly or Dragon in it...
"Could it be that I finally met a technique that has a normal and practical name?" Xie Qing thought in disbelief, and his eyebrows twitched. - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
Better be careful buddy. She's going to want to lick that battery soon
"Judging by her words, she is making great strides when I am next to her," Xie Qing thought, recalling her words – he was puzzled: "How does it work? Have I become a battery?" - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommentedCh 185 Send Help
- BalsamicThunThighs2dReplied to Lushen2000
I must be in the minority for not really caring about Zoey and Atticus's relationship lol I do agree that weird interaction should have been handled before this competition but she doesn't seem important enough to warrant screentime atm. Nothing more annoying than reading about lovebirds in a dangerous situation while flirting, it's immersion breaking when I think about it
Ch 459 Steadying - BalsamicThunThighs2dReplied to ImShadowCh 459 Steadying
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Dominic Toretto would be proud
"Good," Atticus nodded with a smile, "That's exactly what family means. We'll always be there for each other during our times of need, so don't feel bad about the fact that I had to rescue you, especially when you would do the same for me." - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
When you rewrite this novel I hope you keep the secret a bit longer and not just lay it out in the open right away.
She tried hard to maintain her explosive emotions. It happened only for a second before she every back to her solemnity self. - BalsamicThunThighs2dCommented
If I'm being honest I would prefer the secret to be kept within himself more so because his mom is weak and you never know if there's a power to read minds or something similar. Of course that could change but a secret is meant to be kept a secret. It would have been better to stay mysterious and slowly help his mom out with information. Of course there's different ways to go about it but just laying everything out in the open doesn't seem as exciting to read.
"Which is why, I didn't want to hide. I-I don't want to have the same regret and if we don't do anything, the future that I came from would repeat once again!"