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Two problems with that though, first being that’s it’s extremely immersion breaking, especially when it’s a sword that became a saber that turned into a knife all within a few sentences. Second, read too many cultivation novels to know that sword is sword and saber is saber. I am unable to pretend one is the other in this case. No matter how much I wish I could…

This right

This is like the 3rd variant of MC’s last name…

Not edited, bunch of grammar issues so far

Never seen seen a child view his mother as busty…

This was unnecessary, scared to see where the story goes…

Over used trope

Writing isn’t bad and the world setting is good. I just struggle with immersion… I’m really not feeling this so far. Might be just my mage/swordsman bias

lol, ikr finally some WoW representation

Druids in WoW can also use two handed maces