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Not sure which of the two comments I should reply to, as they are a bit contradictory. But this paragraph and the two or three preceding it clearly depict a dagger an assassin weapon. But in chapter 70 you describe it as a small sword… in chapter 70 you describe him creating a skill about dancing/control. All of the earmarks of a high agility assassin type. I don’t have a good impression that you have fleshed out the character at all it feels like you are winging it…
World setting is promising, however this is another MC who was an assassin that was betrayed and transmigrated to a vampire controlled world. Unfortunately the MC is still a assassin, complete waste of the world building. Oh and harem also, it’s fucking annoying reading these stories… Will pass on this, wish the author all the best.
The biggest con of an assasin class is that it’s a melee class and the one that needs the element of surprise to function. It’s ironic that you want him to be better than he was in his previous life, yet you still strangle him with the assasin class. Waste of a wonderful world you’ve built.
Ye me I can see that.
It is not the main source, but it is one of the sources of their strengh. If FAITH is a stat then it affect their strength. coalescing others beliefs into energy. This is what you wrote in this paragraph
This is dumb, why faith. You making depend on other for their strength…
Behr
Seriously
Saber, ugh, lame moving on…
This is a struggle to follow. It’s utter chaos, like each chapter was written independently.
Thanks for choosing mage, was so concerned in my previous comment he will go for the Mirage Lancer
Praying it’s not a assassin class
Calling it, another assasin novel…
Author loosing his mind
Name change, author did not storyboard at all it seems
Good grief, I seriously hope it’ s not another assasin derivative. Would kill for a mage MC or a hybrid mage/warrior.