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2024-08-28 01:21

I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.

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Black_Reaper13
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Personally, I didn't like her group of friends and especially the owner of the inn from the beginning, so it's good that they died. I hope Aria is alive and can meet the MC

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