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2024-08-31 16:49

I didn't have many expectations because of all the comments, although I agree with the part about him being naive at the beginning when he was an adult, for my personal taste I hate cheerful characters like his partner's sister and the innkeeper's daughter, I totally despise those characters, in the part of the transition to the demonic world I didn't understand how it happened I think it's like a part was cut off, since it doesn't explain why he's no longer Ethan, anyway I like his current personality and how he's developing his own strengths, I hope he also starts to open up to Bella, while she stops wanting to manipulate him and falls in love with him, without more to say thanks to the author for this story.

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