my only problem with this work so far was the speed with which the protagonist changed, he was just thrown in a prison (he wasn't tortured or anything like that, just a little despised) and he had an absurd determination to be strong, he was beaten and get up without any problem, like a warrior who participated in several battles, being just an otaku with a weak body/will, that was what bothered me most about this work, if the change had been more gradual, with him suffering and changing Because of that it would be much better.
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Tbf it is a hard balancing act, the best is a balance taking like 30 chapters, but a lot of people hate when it takes more than 5 chapters for character growth
it's webnovel things
Dude, if you want to create a really good story you have to learn to deal with criticism, so what if they're going to complain now? And what will they remember in the future as a masterpiece? If the character development is gradual and well done it would be worth it.
Very true, but as I said it is difficult to get right and when it is done wrong it can ruin a good story
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It doesnt get better at least so far around Chapter 10. Mc a doormat simp type. Any meaningful developments goes straight garbage to simp. Starts seemingly well goals than any past grievance gone back to simping on Shishou, just disgusting. Might be wrong change future but so far went down hill
Right my bad still same simp sobfar up to Ch 17
ot won't take more than2 or 3 chapters as long as you properly pace it with good amount of description in certain scenes that would highlight MCs sufferings that would warrant his change in a logical manner
