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Andreaus_AinClaire
Andreaus_AinClaireLv18mth
2024-08-16 22:10

just finished it, and I really hate betrayal... so regardless of what the author decides, Scathach will always be a traitor, for me atleast... pros, cons, gains, future, any reasons does not matter... a betrayal is always a betrayal, and first impression matters... as I said What Happens Once, can Happen Twice, and will always Happens Infinite Times... it would be great if MC also willingly dispose Scathach someday with indifference and for his personal greater good... Scathach did it for her personal ambition anyway p.s MC is a masochist

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AbsoluteCode
3.7
254 Chs

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Jack_rivvers
Jack_rivversLv1

What was the betrayal? ( i haven't read it)

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Diggo_Fake
Diggo_FakeLv1

She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.

Jack_rivvers:What was the betrayal? ( i haven't read it)
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Jack_rivvers
Jack_rivversLv1

Thanks for explaining.

Diggo_Fake:She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.
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Lerft_craft
Lerft_craftLv2

Aunque también está el hecho, de que si lo hubiera entrenado personalmente el mc no hubiera desarrollado una mentalidad fuerte en la situación precaria en la que se encontraba. Así que es hasta cierto punto válido las acciones de Scathacth.

Diggo_Fake:She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.
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lonelytier0
lonelytier0Lv4

In order to evan get training from Scathach, you'd need to survive traveling through the land of shadow, and a young Cu Chuliann survived in the land of shadow in order to get training. His attitude didn't help either. She is also the warrior queen, so it isn't out of character. It's just the Mc luck that he got her, and he could've gotten worse.

Diggo_Fake:She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.
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lonelytier0
lonelytier0Lv4

OK, I take back some things I said Scathach would've probably helped in character.

lonelytier0:In order to evan get training from Scathach, you'd need to survive traveling through the land of shadow, and a young Cu Chuliann survived in the land of shadow in order to get training. His attitude didn't help either. She is also the warrior queen, so it isn't out of character. It's just the Mc luck that he got her, and he could've gotten worse.
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Vey_Ambrosius
Vey_AmbrosiusLv4

Isn't that what makes the characters feel alive and not just empty puppets?

Diggo_Fake:She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.
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WhiteXlaw
WhiteXlawLv3

Sounds like the actual Scathach, you wouldn't get the Friendship of Thighs if you couldn't even get out of that place. Cu had to travel around the Land of Shadows to be accepted as her student, if the MC couldn't even work his way out of the cage and free himself, he is unworthy to be trained. And it's not actual betrayal, as Sca didn't bow, kneel, or give her oath of loyalty yet. He just summoned her, that's about it. Sca's bar is high, anyone that has followed Scathach's lore in Nasuverse would know that this is just Scathach being Scathach, and the author is probably trying to make her not OOC as much as possible.

Diggo_Fake:She was summoned by MC in a slave prison and was normally supposed to help him escape from there, but abandoned him to force him to become a warrior. Unnecessary and stupid, in my opinion. She could just train him for this instead of such a risky method.
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Kuma_GT007
Kuma_GT007Lv1

Ya I agree, he has to earn the right. It would be kinda bland for him to get trained just cause he summoned her.

WhiteXlaw:Sounds like the actual Scathach, you wouldn't get the Friendship of Thighs if you couldn't even get out of that place. Cu had to travel around the Land of Shadows to be accepted as her student, if the MC couldn't even work his way out of the cage and free himself, he is unworthy to be trained. And it's not actual betrayal, as Sca didn't bow, kneel, or give her oath of loyalty yet. He just summoned her, that's about it. Sca's bar is high, anyone that has followed Scathach's lore in Nasuverse would know that this is just Scathach being Scathach, and the author is probably trying to make her not OOC as much as possible.
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