A Great story so far so keep up the amazing work 💯💯💯💯

I like it currently, I find it good. I am way too lazy to give a real review. I also ain't no dang bot review! The only thing I didn't enjoy is the yappers in the comments giving crazy-ass ideas.

my only problem with this work so far was the speed with which the protagonist changed, he was just thrown in a prison (he wasn't tortured or anything like that, just a little despised) and he had an absurd determination to be strong, he was beaten and get up without any problem, like a warrior who participated in several battles, being just an otaku with a weak body/will, that was what bothered me most about this work, if the change had been more gradual, with him suffering and changing Because of that it would be much better.

Okay, I have absolutely no idea why this fanfiction has such high ratings. The premise is indeed interesting, but the amount of brain cells I have lost due to reading this fanfiction are uncountable, which makes it not worth it. The MC is braindead, a simp, and just a plain idiot. There is indeed a little character development at the start, but it is just so insignificant. He makes a lot of stupid decisions, and the Author isn't any better. To be honest, Scathach shouldn't even have that kind of attitude. I won't talk about this matter much since another person complained about it, but her attitude, and the reasons for her so-called 'betrayal' are plain stupid and look forced af. Some canon characters aren't even portrayed accurately. Like, the Author literally portrayed Tiamat and Aphrodite(the one from Danmachi) as evil and malicious, which is pretty damn annoying as this is too much OOC. There is also the fact that the MC is incompetent in pretty much everything. The guy literally allows everyone to walk over him, and he doesn't even have the balls to stand up for himself at times. He is also useless at fighting as he fights with his damn fists when he literally has a skill that makes him skilled in any weapon. And he doesn't even use his system correctly because he only buys useless equipment, and no skills or abilities when he already has so many 'points' To be honest, this is the first time I am writing such a negative review, but I can't help it- it is really difficult to resist writing anything negative about this fanfic as it just frustrates me so much to read this. There are also not many negative paragraph comments to purify my soul, so I can't help it

just finished it, and I really hate betrayal... so regardless of what the author decides, Scathach will always be a traitor, for me atleast... pros, cons, gains, future, any reasons does not matter... a betrayal is always a betrayal, and first impression matters... as I said What Happens Once, can Happen Twice, and will always Happens Infinite Times... it would be great if MC also willingly dispose Scathach someday with indifference and for his personal greater good... Scathach did it for her personal ambition anyway p.s MC is a masochist

The system is poorly explained, no idea what the MC looks like it's just violently mid

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for those who are interested in stories with puppet mc who are only manipulated by other people then this story is suitable for you (tl)

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