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I read the first chapter. It’s basically the author throwing the truth in the face of NPCs indoctrinated by the system, stuck in the rat race, who come to read these stories that, most of the time, don’t change their lives at all, while they waste time they could be using to do something productive… savage.

friendship between man and woman, it's like raising a chicken. An hour will make you want to eat

yes, these name errors are quite annoying

this is mahito's thought, it was a mistake of ""

Simple Dominion*

Why instead of "maximum technique: descent," are you using "simple control"? And why are you calling Mahito an immortal master? That's random.

The guy can't celebrate for even 1 second, sad.

I confess I didn't understand a thing about this sword. I understood that the technique used is that of the girl with the broom, but otherwise I'm just confused. How can the oldest blade be more powerful? Then why does the girl use a broom if she can do something so powerful with it?

He was probably referring to the 'choice' that Rocks made in betting on the protagonist.

It didn't bother me, but I suppose it's because of the delay between releases, so it seems like the chapter is kind of useless and just filler, but reading it all at once doesn't give that feeling.