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I completely agree, my favorite so far :)
I read up to chapter 76 and I can say that this work is not for everyone, I found it interesting and ignored his god complex, he is very strong and certain parts of his personality I even like, one example is that improving is simply something natural for him, and whoever doesn't really seek to improve he despises, but still in the end I can no longer ignore his god complex, it's simply frustrating for me to continue reading, I like the work and I really wanted to continue, I'm sad 😢, I thought that I could ignore but not I got it in the end.
What really never worked was socialism, that's right.
I could put the number next to it, I never remember the order of opening the gates by the names when they talk in the middle of the fight
I believe that hatred really plays a big role in wars, but the main catalysts of wars are human interests and greed, as long as there are people it is inevitable to have wars, unless someone controls it, like Hashirama for example, but this is also temporary in the end since one day he would die.
This rewrite is really interesting, I'm liking it so far, I just can't say it's better than the first version yet (because it still lacks more drama compared to the first version, in my opinion), but it has more detail and context to it. the development of situations than the previous version.
I only know JJK, will this be a problem?
I noticed this work because it goes into great detail about the process of creating games, design, art, outsourcing, etc. The only bad part is the translation, which is very strange, I'm going to read it and I have to keep reviewing it to see if I read it right, I don't know if it's because of the choice of words or it's just really bad.
As a Brazilian, I'm glad you made it clear that you are including the continent and not the country, because it seems that America is only limited to the USA worldwide.
I'm currently on chapter 8, and I wanted to start by saying that this work is better than I expected, the story is not just smut, it was really interesting and well done, but, as we know, nothing is perfect, so I'm going to mention the things that But they are bothering me in this work. 1 - the characters' way of speaking, using an extensive list of vulgar language, which using the canonical reference doesn't make any sense for Hiruzen to talk like that, but ok, that's the point that honestly bothers me the least. 2 - the protagonist's famous slave seal, honestly what bothers me the most isn't even the seal itself (which isn't even really a slave seal, I think), but the fact that the protagonist accepts it willingly since he already has It's a beautiful story with the loss of freedom, and him simply accepting it in a good way is what irritates me the most, considering that it doesn't make sense given everything he's been through to simply accept this loss of freedom as if it were no big deal. and finally my 3rd and last point - I hope with all my being that the Author doesn't decide to go down some dark paths in terms of smut, because he said to expect some possible gender swap stuff and I'm worried about that ( don't make me abandon this work)