The story itself up to what I have available, (chapter 50) Has been very enjoyable and interesting. A few VERY minor spelling errors but consistency is there in terms of names and genders not changing every few paragraphs like in some books. Overall very enjoyable read, even though I admit I was a bit confused by the second summon so quickly after the first, but not sure how that will end up yet. In the end this is a really new story and ill update the review once more is available. My one major concern is Ive noticed a couple dropped stories by the author and im really hoping this isnt going to become one of those as it has a lot of promise. The world building is good, although not everything is well explained, probably on purpose to go more in depth into it later (structure of the cities, it was talking about sectors but that doesnt really get explained at all as of yet.)
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Im very grateful for the review, the structure of the cities is definitely something I'll need to explain, can't believe I forgot to include it. the summons are supposed to occour daily -- (or whenever he obtains a conduit) As for the grammer errors, as long as you are willing to help out, I'll fix it as fast as I can! Thank you ✨
No worries! loving the story and the direction. And I lost the exact spot but ive only seen 2 errors and one was just a missing letter in a word, wasnt a big deal. Its nice to read a story that is so well done.
Zurbluris:Im very grateful for the review, the structure of the cities is definitely something I'll need to explain, can't believe I forgot to include it. the summons are supposed to occour daily -- (or whenever he obtains a conduit) As for the grammer errors, as long as you are willing to help out, I'll fix it as fast as I can! Thank you ✨
