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2024-11-13 22:29

I thought book had a good premise but there are some things i dont like. 1. He had an SSS Rank Talent. Even If Summoners are bad, they should think that such a high talent is something worth. 2. I was hoping there is no girlfriend/friend betraying him cliche. 3. When Cinder was summoned we saw her rank but after that no info panel for the other dragons and Daven summoning was even skipped. 4. He was threatening to get that sap from the world tree using force. I dont like MC's that resort to force when they dont get something and the other party is innocent. That's were i left. All in all: Not my Jam

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