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Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor4mth
2024-08-13 01:45

Hello guys, it's the author here. Decided it was finally time to make my shameless review after 100 chapters. treated this as a QnA section where you can get answers to your questions, but no spoilers. when writing this novel I really wanted to create something unique that was not really out there yet, and as a fan of novels and comics that keep me guessing I was sure did the same here, weaving in little mysteries. The concept of dragon-mancers is an already explored yet not commonly used concept, so I combined it with a little apocalyptic Si-Fi setting. the begining part of the novel is a bit slow due to the fact I had to lay down some groundwork for future chapters. This is my best work yet and I'm really proud the amount of effort I put in this time. Hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you.

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FrostMoonIX
FrostMoonIXLv3

Can you pls change fml illustration?[img=recommend]

FrostMoonIX
FrostMoonIXLv3

Or change the fml

Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

fml? female lead?

FrostMoonIX:Can you pls change fml illustration?[img=recommend]
FrostMoonIX
FrostMoonIXLv3

The fml has to be somewhat strong/ talented to stay relevant in the future

Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

hmm 🧐 will will slowly making her bolder help?

FrostMoonIX:The fml has to be somewhat strong/ talented to stay relevant in the future
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

She is just the most cliche female lead imaginable. I really hoped it's someone else, doesn't really matter who else, just not the most cliche one, but oh well, it's your novel

Zurbluris:hmm 🧐 will will slowly making her bolder help?
Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

🧐 I see... guess she's gonna get replaced then... quick question, what would qualities would you like in a female lead

FallenAngeI:She is just the most cliche female lead imaginable. I really hoped it's someone else, doesn't really matter who else, just not the most cliche one, but oh well, it's your novel
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

She should be strong and talented enough to be able to help at least a little bit when MC needs it. Also interesting enough for the readers. The shy teammate is almost always the female lead so it's pretty boring (for me at least). Someone like Anya would be really interesting because she is both strong and influencial is it will create very interesting dynamic/relationship. Another good option might be someone like Bea, or even one if his dragons if that's something you've thought about. But the last one is pretty different to say the least xD, just throwing it out there.

Zurbluris:🧐 I see... guess she's gonna get replaced then... quick question, what would qualities would you like in a female lead
Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

Seems it will be one of his dragons then... Someone like Anya would only fall in love with someone stronger than her, even when she dose, she would be more like a sugar mommy 🧐

FallenAngeI:She should be strong and talented enough to be able to help at least a little bit when MC needs it. Also interesting enough for the readers. The shy teammate is almost always the female lead so it's pretty boring (for me at least). Someone like Anya would be really interesting because she is both strong and influencial is it will create very interesting dynamic/relationship. Another good option might be someone like Bea, or even one if his dragons if that's something you've thought about. But the last one is pretty different to say the least xD, just throwing it out there.
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

I won't complain with a sugar mommy xD. But on a serious note, it's important for you to like the female lead since it's your story, so if you like Lily more just go for her

Zurbluris:Seems it will be one of his dragons then... Someone like Anya would only fall in love with someone stronger than her, even when she dose, she would be more like a sugar mommy 🧐
Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

Gotta write what people like else I'm not gonna eat

FallenAngeI:I won't complain with a sugar mommy xD. But on a serious note, it's important for you to like the female lead since it's your story, so if you like Lily more just go for her
FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13

The most important thing is to write the romance well. If you truly think that Lily is a good fit for him than go for it.

Zurbluris:Gotta write what people like else I'm not gonna eat
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_SKW_
_SKW_Lv2

Author, just do what you think is best. With a well made romance, few will complain. Besides, if you choose one of the summons to be the FL, you'll open the door for readers to request a harem and, over time, more things. It's not always best to follow readers' desires. Anyway, I just hope you think carefully before implementing a suggestion or idea. I also think it would be better if she could keep up with the MC, though I don’t mind if its not a summon.

Zurbluris:Gotta write what people like else I'm not gonna eat
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TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

That would be a mistake. As an author it’s good to read your readers thoughts and comments, but you are the architect of this novel. You’re not going to be able to please everyone and if you start changing everything to please everyone, this will no longer be your baby and you’re more likely to drop it bc you don’t enjoy it anymore. Anyway, just food for thought 😁

Zurbluris:🧐 I see... guess she's gonna get replaced then... quick question, what would qualities would you like in a female lead
Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

ya I'm sticking with Lila, the pressure of seeing Alister get stronger would make her realize she has to be strong too to stand by his side ✨

TwistedTsunami:That would be a mistake. As an author it’s good to read your readers thoughts and comments, but you are the architect of this novel. You’re not going to be able to please everyone and if you start changing everything to please everyone, this will no longer be your baby and you’re more likely to drop it bc you don’t enjoy it anymore. Anyway, just food for thought 😁
LordGrimm_XI
LordGrimm_XILv3

You could also look at the characters and choose the most populair female as the fml

privatefreakshow
privatefreakshowLv2

hey, author, I just wanted to ask what platform you used to make the cover, it's stunning!

Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

Niji journey

privatefreakshow:hey, author, I just wanted to ask what platform you used to make the cover, it's stunning!
Zurbluris
ZurblurisAuthor

Niji journey

privatefreakshow:hey, author, I just wanted to ask what platform you used to make the cover, it's stunning!
privatefreakshow
privatefreakshowLv2

thanx 🤗

Zurbluris:Niji journey
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