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whats the obsession with being called demon or devil? its not even kl just cringe
mc complaining too muchhis shitty can u cut back a little on that. either make him do what he says or make him shut up
a lot of talking why don't he just leave the damn place. every fic give some lame excuse. he's not even gaining much from the place
have some stones man
yea better to have him be like amazo
mc is coming off as a simp and a fan boy
the fic is cracking already. sight it was kinda fun while it lasted. his young master behavor is getting annoying, and the other charactors are being dumb down too much. Fugaku would not have done what he did here and its weird. after all his son picked a different side and choose to kill his family and the guy did nothing and ur gonna make me believe he's gonna flip out over a female 😂
I was gonna come wine about the choice but I waited, and you sold it man. that shared moment from her pov sold 👍🏾👍🏾thanks for the chap
honestly with the power he has or got I expected more fighting less talking more blood. non of that happen even though u said he did this and that theres not much details. now to me he could have choose not to be basically someones slave which he is making himself to what fight for a bulls*t throne. its because of how well put togeather the fic is, that have allowed me to make it this far. I just want a heads up if he's gonna be hiding and running around like a dog for much longer
I found his lifemaking the mafia more interesting.