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I was simply compelled to leave a review. The good writing, plot I had in mind, excellent world building, and perfect dialogue and character interactions compelled me to do so. This famfiction is a perfect example of an excellent rewrite of the original work. One that you end up finding better than the original work, if you dare me say so. It has captivated me in a way I can't explain, making me stay up all night reading. Something that only a few works can do. The author is to be congratulated. I say this with complete sincerity and admiration. And translator, I would kiss you if I could (but I'm straight, so I owe you. LOL). Thank you for bringing this unexpected and excellent work to us. (Sorry, English is not my first language, so please ignore possible mistakes, pls)

Still team Adam.

Man, this fic is just fantastic. It completely changed my perspective on Adam. I'm totally rooting for him now! Even in the original series.

But a few chapters ago, he said he made a deal with Orochimaru and Otogakure.

I hope MC doesn't forgive All Might so easily. If he is going to forgive, let it be slow and gradual, and let All Might try hard to earn forgiveness. After all, what All Might said to the original Izuku, drove him to suicide. This is not a small thing.

I'm heartbroken... (Sigh) With the appearance of this sentient system, the attractiveness of this fic decreases by 30%. Systems are great, really, but sentient... I don't know how to explain it, it removes that "alone in the new world" individuality. I even felt sad. I was so excited.

But this fic is a translation, so I believe that OberonLA wouldn't make such drastic changes to the story like this.

We've all known this for a long time 😂

Just a friendly suggestion to improve the reading experience. It would be nice if you stopped calling his ability a cheat all the time (Even though it was a cheat given to him in the end hahahaha). You could refer to it as just quick adaptability, quick adaptability ability, or just ability. In my opinion it's not really worth much (haha), it would be ideal. I don't know how to explain it, the constant reminder that his skill is a cheat makes me a little uncomfortable. Revealing this at the beginning is good and ideal. The other times it gave the impression that even though he tried hard to learn and use the skill, the results were nothing more than cheating. Sorry if I didn't explain it well, I don't really know how to express what bothered me. I really hope I didn't offend you.

I can confirm this as I have tried to read. It's not TERRIBLE, but it is a little disconcerting since the characters' names are Chinese and some translated parts are very confusing. This only applies to those who use a translator. As for me, for example, I use Google Translate.