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Hunab_ku
Hunab_kuLv111mth
2024-05-24 11:49

I wonder when you will see a normal fanfic where the protagonist has no system and is not a protagonist with some trick and is normal... that takes 3 years to 1 year to level up

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FangYuan1234
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It sounds interesting but the problem with such an mc is that he would be left behind by Bell. The dude can go 3-4-5 levels in a single year and the enemies he faces grow accordingly, so if that imaginary guy who grows at a normal pace he will basically become useless. The method to counter that would be to put him far in the past, like Riveria's age or even further, so that he can be already OP when cannon rolls around. That's a very good option and a very interesting one, but the main reason people write fanfiction usually is that they either can't or don't want to deal with world building, so they steal it. Making a character so old would force the author to basically make their own series of events that happened in the past, altering Cannon in a way that can't be done without extensive knowledge of the original and willingness to work a lot on it. That being said, I too would like to read such a fanfic! If it's written well, it would have extreme potential, so thank you for the review and I hope you find what you are searching for.

Hunab_ku
Hunab_kuLv1

I don't see the problem that one is lv 3 when the problems start and bell cranel is lv5 in 2 years and the (character) you use takes 2 or 3 years after all, the (CHARACTER) you are using is not bell Cranil and he doesn't have the heart of Bell Cranil, if he has talent, the (character) should at least go from lv1 to lv2 in a year, which is how long it took Aiz Wallestein.

FangYuan1234:It sounds interesting but the problem with such an mc is that he would be left behind by Bell. The dude can go 3-4-5 levels in a single year and the enemies he faces grow accordingly, so if that imaginary guy who grows at a normal pace he will basically become useless. The method to counter that would be to put him far in the past, like Riveria's age or even further, so that he can be already OP when cannon rolls around. That's a very good option and a very interesting one, but the main reason people write fanfiction usually is that they either can't or don't want to deal with world building, so they steal it. Making a character so old would force the author to basically make their own series of events that happened in the past, altering Cannon in a way that can't be done without extensive knowledge of the original and willingness to work a lot on it. That being said, I too would like to read such a fanfic! If it's written well, it would have extreme potential, so thank you for the review and I hope you find what you are searching for.
FangYuan1234
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Hunab_ku:I don't see the problem that one is lv 3 when the problems start and bell cranel is lv5 in 2 years and the (character) you use takes 2 or 3 years after all, the (CHARACTER) you are using is not bell Cranil and he doesn't have the heart of Bell Cranil, if he has talent, the (character) should at least go from lv1 to lv2 in a year, which is how long it took Aiz Wallestein.
NewGame_3655
NewGame_3655Lv1

You just have to get rid of Bell. But it's like you said, apart from a few fanfic writer, the majority avoid world building (they prefer to do those poorly made stories about dimensional travel ou not develop a world beyond the copy and paste of the original events, than to work well on just one world).

FangYuan1234:It sounds interesting but the problem with such an mc is that he would be left behind by Bell. The dude can go 3-4-5 levels in a single year and the enemies he faces grow accordingly, so if that imaginary guy who grows at a normal pace he will basically become useless. The method to counter that would be to put him far in the past, like Riveria's age or even further, so that he can be already OP when cannon rolls around. That's a very good option and a very interesting one, but the main reason people write fanfiction usually is that they either can't or don't want to deal with world building, so they steal it. Making a character so old would force the author to basically make their own series of events that happened in the past, altering Cannon in a way that can't be done without extensive knowledge of the original and willingness to work a lot on it. That being said, I too would like to read such a fanfic! If it's written well, it would have extreme potential, so thank you for the review and I hope you find what you are searching for.
FangYuan1234
FangYuan1234Author

NewGame_3655:You just have to get rid of Bell. But it's like you said, apart from a few fanfic writer, the majority avoid world building (they prefer to do those poorly made stories about dimensional travel ou not develop a world beyond the copy and paste of the original events, than to work well on just one world).
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AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

I’m sure you will see how well that story flops then, who wants to read hundreds of chapters of the protagonist being worse than canon fodder?!

AllHailThe69th
AllHailThe69thLv4

why do you want to read a story where the mc would get constantly side lined lol

LoudGryphon
LoudGryphonLv2

Although not a Danmachi Fanfic, one story that does this “Far past” Idea really well is Realistic Tower of God: The Martial Way. It is set in the far past of the Tower of God storyline where the Main Character is a Martial Artist who died and was reborn in the Tower, who thus decided to climb the tower, wishing to Surpass his peak in his previous life. In doing so, he actually meets and travels with some pretty important people in the ToG storyline, where the author does a pretty good job exploring them in his og way. The author also manages the Protagonists power growth pretty well, with his ‘unique power’ being something that gives him an edge while not being that op. Although it sadly has been dropped/on hiatus or something for about 2 years now, i really recommend checking it out, its a pretty unique fanfic.

FangYuan1234:It sounds interesting but the problem with such an mc is that he would be left behind by Bell. The dude can go 3-4-5 levels in a single year and the enemies he faces grow accordingly, so if that imaginary guy who grows at a normal pace he will basically become useless. The method to counter that would be to put him far in the past, like Riveria's age or even further, so that he can be already OP when cannon rolls around. That's a very good option and a very interesting one, but the main reason people write fanfiction usually is that they either can't or don't want to deal with world building, so they steal it. Making a character so old would force the author to basically make their own series of events that happened in the past, altering Cannon in a way that can't be done without extensive knowledge of the original and willingness to work a lot on it. That being said, I too would like to read such a fanfic! If it's written well, it would have extreme potential, so thank you for the review and I hope you find what you are searching for.
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Keyaruga_Tsuki
Keyaruga_TsukiLv4

Ahem. 1:Writing quality was definitely upgraded after chapter 10.Everything flowed smoother and it was less confusing over all the writing quality took an extreme jump after chapter 10 and it was for the better.Im very much interested in the story and have caught up since my last review. 2:Story development is still around the same mark but it is starting to move and push onwards.Very interesting things have happened and the main cast is starting to appear this is going to get good.So these recent chapters have been great. 3:Character Design back in my last review it was awful BUT...now that I've caught up, I must say this is a very unique character Design and for that it deserves 5 stars.His evolution is awesome and his character Design incorporates that and I love it. 4:Updating stability this time around its a 3 star.You took a long break I don't know what happened but maybe that was just me.Im very sure you stopped uploading for awhile though but so far you're doing good so I'll see what happens in the future. 5:World background is pretty good.Many characters are being introduced and they all have their own way of thinking and their own speculation towards the Mc from their interactions.I like it. Overall: After chapter 10 the story has gone up and further upwards. 📊.I give it a proper 4.2 stars.It needs improvement on the writing quality but it's okay you aren't a veteran writer so it's fine any further improvement would be shocking but most definitely welcomed.As for Story development it's a 5 many things have happened and you will never guess what until u read so I suggest u read.Character Design is a 5 you can't go further than that. Updating stability again it's a 3, You took a long break.World background is a 4 the main cast is starting to show up so the ball is just now starting to roll.You should read the story its a very good fanfic.

True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4
Keyaruga_Tsuki
Keyaruga_TsukiLv4

The writing quality is honestly what made me stpp reading it.Yeah it's not bad but damn it isn't good either.Maybe I've read to many high quality Fanfics or maybe I'm just not in the mood.I don't know but the writing quality is turning me off at least for now. story development: It's as much as you'll expect from any fanfic.So far it's okay??Nothing outstanding but nothing Bad either 3 stars. Character Design:It's at a 2 star I don't know what he looks like.All we know is he's got a shirt and short pants when he got in the world but now it's all gone..or uh "tattered prices of clothing". So that's a 2 star should be a 1 since the only thing we did know was what he was wearing but not anymore. Updating stability: Honestly I don't know much about it so I just put a default 4 stars. World Background: It's danmachi but since he's in the dungeon we don't get much of the world background and we don't get any descriptions of the Dugeon and what it looks like. So this is a 3 star...again I should've put it as a 1 but I'm not mean. overall: I've been really trying to find a danmachi fanfic that has the writing quality of "In danmachi with plasmids" My only issue with that fanfic is that it's Harem and i just can't bring myself to like Harem.Thats just weird to me. Overall though for this particular fanfic 2.8 is the rating.Writing quality not good and not bad..Grammar definitely needs some checking maybe add some commas here and there.Misspelling isn't bad but it's hard to understand without commas I have to reread everything just to make sure u didn't say "The goblin bit my neck with it's teeth and i stopped bleeding" I was hell of confused so writing quality is a 2 star.It will be a 3 star when grammar gets added and 4 star when the writing improves overall. In the end I say Read at your own discretion.

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