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Hunab_ku2 months agoPostedAt the beginning it is explained that they are not going to have any ninjutsu, only the iconic ability... to later have chakra and improve with it... and I still don't understand why they don't have their quick and have storage seals for their skill ammunition... these types of stories are garbage +18
- Hunab_ku3 months agoCommented
trash.... it had potential and he ruined it by adding sex and possibly a harem
- Hunab_ku3 months agoCommented
no dendro no sumeru
- Hunab_ku3 months agoCommented
no dendro
- Hunab_ku7 months agoPosted
a crappy fanfic... there's no plot or development... it went downhill from chapter 1 ......................................................................................................................................................................................
- Hunab_ku7 months agoCommented
What a tremendous nonsense! I just read it... it treats explosive tags as if they were metals... besides, pure chakra is neutral; only lightning element chakra could create magnets with metals, and I don't think anyone would know how to make magnetic paper strong enough to do that... but since it's a fanfic, you have to turn your brain off... not even the magnetic style interacted like that... the only thing I see possible is Konan doing that with her paper style.
- Hunab_ku7 months agoCommented
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- Hunab_ku10 months agoPosted
The ages of the characters are wrong, and Riviria is 106 years old, so she could not have witnessed the arrival of Uranos... she wasn't even born yet... Uranos arrived at Genkai 800 or 900 years before Riviria was born.
This book has been deleted. - Hunab_kua year agoReplied to Denis_Abstract
The problem here is that they want to replace Bell's lujar even though I don't like Bell Crane.... the protagonist can obtain power to something similar bell either by an ability or magic and develops based on that is well respects something the things of the world of danmachi... but something that the protagonist obtains a skill or magic to be able to obtain 1 thousand magics and abilities breaks the world apart from that I see it coming that the protagonist will get a new power every time he runs into a stronger enemy and the previous power will no longer serve and he would need a new power to defeat the new enemy... there is no development
