what fact isn't correct?

like reading your comments, sometimes I purposely change some events on purpose to fit my own writing bro. only stuff I don't change is their power, ability, effect of the weapon or sacred gear etc.

off the top of my head, Raiser isn't the heir to the Phenex family. This one is minor tho.

well, as i say. i change the details to fit my writing/narratives. i mean that's the point of fanfic. I'm not gonna follow everything down to the last details. that's stressful. all i want to do with this fic is close my head and write whatever came to my mind

Every author said that same thing when pointed out a mistake...I get that it's a fanfic in which you have complete narrative control, but there are still logical consequences to some things. Let's use this example, you set Raiser as the heir of the Phenex family. If so, cool, but now you must do something about his brothers. Easiest would be to kill them. My gripe on this type of modification to cannon is that it isn't taken to it's logical conclusion. You stated that his brothers are 'busy' with the family business...Isn't that what the family leader/heir is supposed to do?

i guess. but whatever man. if you like it then continue reading. if you dislike it there's no one stopping you from dropping the fic. I had enough of this kind of talk that only agitate my mind and heart which make me unavailable to focus on writing. if you wanna be critical it's up to you as I never claim I am a good author to begin with and I am not a perfect person to be perfect at every single detail. my bio should had stated it, im a trash author writing trash fic

Bro hit him with the “whatever” after he was proven wrong💀

It's clear that this novel is horrible

He’s also a pedo