Nice concept but it reads like a crack fic. Also the mc is generic af, basically ur average human in a 12th dimensional cat but I don’t think the author really knows what he’s talking about with his whole 12th dimensional thing so for now he’s just a cat with shadow powers. Average Dxd wishfulment fic so far.
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clearly you didn't read the synopsis first. also, mc Dont need to always show his power idiot. only when needed. also yes, it's a wish fulfilment fic
Well if you don’t want someone to judge your work you could just not post it. You said you were writing this for fun after all. The comment about this reading like a crack fic was mostly a response to another review that said your grammar was good, which I disagree with. Secondly, I said nothing about your mc hiding his power. Rather, I’m saying your mc doesn’t demonstrate any traits of a 12th dimensional being thereby ruining your concept. I don’t think you understand the 12th dimension at all, since anything at the 12th dimension could probably destroy and rebuild the world with a subconscious thought while sleeping. It would’ve been understandable if you nerfed him but as of right now, your mc is literally just a flerken and that’s not what I’m here for.
Daoist_KittyKat:clearly you didn't read the synopsis first. also, mc Dont need to always show his power idiot. only when needed. also yes, it's a wish fulfilment fic
well, I apologize if I misunderstood your words. after reading bunch of bad comments. my head just not right. also about mc hide power. i add an explanation in the chapter I just posted to explain my reason. also, I do actually don't understand 12th Dimensional being. all I know, above the 5th. they can basically do anything they wished as you stated.
tt_g:Well if you don’t want someone to judge your work you could just not post it. You said you were writing this for fun after all. The comment about this reading like a crack fic was mostly a response to another review that said your grammar was good, which I disagree with. Secondly, I said nothing about your mc hiding his power. Rather, I’m saying your mc doesn’t demonstrate any traits of a 12th dimensional being thereby ruining your concept. I don’t think you understand the 12th dimension at all, since anything at the 12th dimension could probably destroy and rebuild the world with a subconscious thought while sleeping. It would’ve been understandable if you nerfed him but as of right now, your mc is literally just a flerken and that’s not what I’m here for.
also, i just learned what is Flerken just now. it's not my intention to copy it
tt_g:Well if you don’t want someone to judge your work you could just not post it. You said you were writing this for fun after all. The comment about this reading like a crack fic was mostly a response to another review that said your grammar was good, which I disagree with. Secondly, I said nothing about your mc hiding his power. Rather, I’m saying your mc doesn’t demonstrate any traits of a 12th dimensional being thereby ruining your concept. I don’t think you understand the 12th dimension at all, since anything at the 12th dimension could probably destroy and rebuild the world with a subconscious thought while sleeping. It would’ve been understandable if you nerfed him but as of right now, your mc is literally just a flerken and that’s not what I’m here for.
They are basically as powerful as one above all (Omniversal entity)
Daoist_KittyKat:well, I apologize if I misunderstood your words. after reading bunch of bad comments. my head just not right. also about mc hide power. i add an explanation in the chapter I just posted to explain my reason. also, I do actually don't understand 12th Dimensional being. all I know, above the 5th. they can basically do anything they wished as you stated.
yes
Man_of_culture_69:They are basically as powerful as one above all (Omniversal entity)
