The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

Nice concept but it reads like a crack fic. Also the mc is generic af, basically ur average human in a 12th dimensional cat but I don’t think the author really knows what he’s talking about with his whole 12th dimensional thing so for now he’s just a cat with shadow powers. Average Dxd wishfulment fic so far.

For those who like this type of novel, this must be wonderful. But I don't particularly like it very much.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

Good story and decent grammar ,but mc is a pedo 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

Waiting for more Honkai ✔ Harem ✔ OP Mc ✔ Anti Hero MC ✔ Cute Waifus ✔

The story feels off. It's not bad or anything, but the interactions and world-building feels strange. It doesn't seem like it is written in DXD and yet it is.

you know it's kinda ironic that I see this fic as soon as I've just watched Kris allegations.

I keep seeing this author, and unknowingly, I've read 3 or 4 of his fics(or, I've started to read). One thing all of them have in common is that they are quite interesting in the first 20 or so chapters. The Mc does show signs of being a sick degenerate, but he's controlled and it doesn't fell bad to read. After chapter 20 or so, it's like all brakes are off. Also, another thing that quite annoys me in fanfiction is that the authors don't fact-check their knowledge. If it was some obscure fandom like an old game or something it could be understood, but for DxD, every single fact is barely a google search away.

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