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FoodReviewSnakeLv48mth
2024-06-18 23:35

you have got be a kidding me female support character a lackeys u can do better then that anouther subordinate copy paste with bait villain tags and cringey dialogues filled with npc 5 star comments

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Ready_Author

Not certain I quite get what you are trying to say, would you mind explaining exactly what seems to be giving you the ick?

Just_Franck09Lv4

Females are useless, What don’t you get fool! It’s utterly laughable and you’re a simp!

Ready_:Not certain I quite get what you are trying to say, would you mind explaining exactly what seems to be giving you the ick?
FoodReviewSnakeLv4

I mean whatever I just said in my comment how difficult is it to understand simple english

Ready_:Not certain I quite get what you are trying to say, would you mind explaining exactly what seems to be giving you the ick?
Ready_Author

I would not call that first comment 'simple English', but I was expecting examples of what you did not appreciate, you know, so that I may write better, I do hope that you take the time to do so, since you surely did not forget everything that you read, right?

FoodReviewSnake:I mean whatever I just said in my comment how difficult is it to understand simple english
EltaibyLv3

Simple english? All I read were the inchorent ramblings of a child. Listen, here is my advice to you: 1) Learn how to form properly structured sentences 2) Learn how to put your thoughts into words. This could help ya [img=recommend]

FoodReviewSnake:I mean whatever I just said in my comment how difficult is it to understand simple english
Drunk_SparrowLv11

Nah bro, u aced in MTL path.

FoodReviewSnake:I mean whatever I just said in my comment how difficult is it to understand simple english
FoodReviewSnakeLv4

That is true

Drunk_Sparrow:Nah bro, u aced in MTL path.
MR_SYUBHIOLv2

He can speak as he likes there isn't any problem with that. He genuinely expressed what he didn't like and suggested removing the tag to avoid misleading others. I think you could benefit from some learning here before judging others.

Eltaiby:Simple english? All I read were the inchorent ramblings of a child. Listen, here is my advice to you: 1) Learn how to form properly structured sentences 2) Learn how to put your thoughts into words. This could help ya [img=recommend]
EltaibyLv3

Congratulations on acing the MTL test. What he said is still incoherent and makes no sense.

MR_SYUBHIO:He can speak as he likes there isn't any problem with that. He genuinely expressed what he didn't like and suggested removing the tag to avoid misleading others. I think you could benefit from some learning here before judging others.
MR_SYUBHIOLv2

There isn't a single 'correct' way to communicate, you know that, right? After all, there is slang. What matters is understanding the message, and I perfectly understood what he said. It's a skill issue on your part, not his.

Eltaiby:Congratulations on acing the MTL test. What he said is still incoherent and makes no sense.
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MrLollip0pLv14

well, i don't know if you've noticed, but being able to understand mad ramblings isn't a very sane skill to want to learn. skill issue? yeah. but useless skill.

MR_SYUBHIO:There isn't a single 'correct' way to communicate, you know that, right? After all, there is slang. What matters is understanding the message, and I perfectly understood what he said. It's a skill issue on your part, not his.
DuhastLv1

Ok, I am soo confused, WTF is MTL? Is it Mouth To Lung? Like just trash talking with no real thoughts?

Drunk_Sparrow:Nah bro, u aced in MTL path.
Tired12Lv15

I understand where you're coming from, but disagree. Like most writers, the author improves over time, and without giving away any spoilers, the way the main character treats the female ' supporting' (Not really much support going on) characters later in the novel feels more as if they are used as tools to further Death's objectives. That said, I agree in that I believe the "Villain" tag is entirely unnecessary. While, from our perspective, the protagonist might be seen as a villain, within the context of the author’s world, this interpretation doesn’t entirely hold true in my opinion.

Immortal_LordLv13

Incoherent and yet makes no sense at the same time. Man vocabulary is out of this world

Eltaiby:Congratulations on acing the MTL test. What he said is still incoherent and makes no sense.
GreatUnseenFreakLv13

I'm going to read this as sarcasm

Just_Franck09:Females are useless, What don’t you get fool! It’s utterly laughable and you’re a simp!
GreatUnseenFreakLv13

skill issue?

MR_SYUBHIO:There isn't a single 'correct' way to communicate, you know that, right? After all, there is slang. What matters is understanding the message, and I perfectly understood what he said. It's a skill issue on your part, not his.
Yanlin_XLv2

wholesome to see readers standing up for an author. the commenter still didn't give reason on why they didn't enjoy this. bot reviews? people here don't seem like bots. bad FML? might be true but not enough to give the story a 1 star review. misleading tags? debatable but a villain is someone who doesn't just kill or stands opposite to the hero's views. there are "mirror antagonists" who share the same views as the hero but have different ways of going about their goals. as long as the author paints 2 sides black and white and makes a character stand on the "dark" path then they are a villain. just like broken villains or villains who were simply minding their own stuff before getting disturbed. it's not a matter of right or wrong. there is no philosophical debate. it's about how the author feels.

The_Swedish_KnightLv13

mtl means machine translated many novels that are of other language uses mtl to translate to english.

Duhast:Ok, I am soo confused, WTF is MTL? Is it Mouth To Lung? Like just trash talking with no real thoughts?
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