Just_Franck09

Tftc!

Interesting story! 🤔

I haven’t read it, but I like the description.

No, this MC isn’t a real villain. Far from it—he’s a typical anti-hero disguised as a villain. Also, the author is quite amateurish, probably very young or new to webnovels and writing.

Thanks for the chapter! 🔥🔥🔥🔥

FINALLY caught up again! I had completely forgotten how top-tier this book is! 🔥🔥🔥🔥😭🔥🔥🔥🔥

So, there’s no explanation? Kenny just looks white with an American name but is actually Japanese? Come on, this has to be explained to the readers, or else it’s a plot hole. Manhwas and novels may be similar in many ways, but understand that they are two completely different media. In manhwas, a character who’s actually Korean or Japanese might pass as looking foreign, with blue eyes and blonde hair, and readers generally accept it because it could just be the author’s art style. But the same cannot be said about a novel, my friend—there has to be a logical explanation behind it.

Also, author, why does the MC have a foreign name? Kenny isn’t a Japanese name; it’s English. Is Kenny perhaps a foreigner born or raised in Japan? Or maybe you did it intentionally and will reveal things as the story goes on? 🧐

Please don’t take anything negatively; it’s all constructive criticism and comes from a place of love because I want to see your novel do well and be very successful. 😁

How does Kenny know he’s not a balancer? They literally just met, unless they were already acquainted, which you made it sound like they weren’t. All you did was make the investigator say, “As you know, I’m not a balancer.” This is wrong—he should have introduced himself as a non-balancer right from the start, without adding the "as you know." Even better would be to show that he's not a balancer by describing it. You know, show, don't tell—one of the fundamental rules of writing.