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Mr_Ostrich

Mr_Ostrich

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No more hiding and running away from difficulties.

2023-10-30 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich2mth
    Replied to Humbl3noob

    best wn fr

    Gradually, the roars of mutated beasts and a piercing sound rang out, occasionally mixed in with eerie laughter.
    Outside Of Time
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich3mth
    Commented

    it's fun so far but she us so stupid

    She was now calling this-- Operation 'Turn Dark into Light'.
    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Nitchiren

    :) I'll try my best.

    Ch 1 Lingering Memories
    The Dream God's Legacy
    Fantasy · Mr_Ostrich
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Posted

    This review is based on first five chapters only. Writing wise, it's good and so is the stability of updates. The world development so far is well average but it's alright considering its just the initial few chapters. My only issue is the progression of the plot and character of the mc. I honestly don't see any depth in him. The first five chapters also felt slow and bland. What I am saying is I don't see a hook that makes me want to read further. (But I am pretty picky of what I read so that's that.) Overall, this has big potential. Good luck, author.

    Re:Villain
    Fantasy · Shadlight
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Commented

    Honestly feels too slow and bland.

    Ch 4 Epic Transformation
    Re:Villain
    Fantasy · Shadlight
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Commented

    Why info dump in the start? Not needed. Better show slowly than tell. Also shouldn't the guy have a new personality cause of assimilation and all?

    Ch 3 Zeref Darthen: The Master's Change
    Re:Villain
    Fantasy · Shadlight
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Space_kook

    for 30+ chaps? weird. :(

    "And since I have requested your help and you have accepted it,
    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Commented

    So far it's better than most wn stuff I have read. (Not that I have read many) but sentences break after , makes it feel off. eh just being nitpicky.

    "And since I have requested your help and you have accepted it,
    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    There may be explicit description of nudity. (only when required obviously.) As for sex, no, I won't go in its details. In short, this is not a smut novel. Try reading a few chapters though. I am confident that they will hook you to read further. :)

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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to SUS_Just

    It's a disease. It will make sense later on.

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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Darth_Nihilus_8425

    manipulative doesn't mean evil but glad you liked it.

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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Eclipse_Ranger

    More like greed

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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to FUCKYOUWEBNOVEL111

    Money you pay also goes to the author. But yeah it's understandable that not everyone can pay.

    The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
    Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Posted

    As a reader, I always believe that a story can only be called a 'story' as long as the characters struggle in it. When they struggle to achieve their goals, to beat their enemies, to defy their fates, clearing the obstacles then becomes more satisfying. So here we are. In this webnovel, you will find the following things: - A fun main character who actually thinks. - No random, unnecessary, overpowered level-ups. I don't like it. - Harem? Yes, but it won't be 1000 women in 10 chapters. I will give depth to every major character, so obviously the numbers won't reach a million or whatnot. And more importantly, my target is to go with the flow and not force things. - No NTR, yuri, etc., in the harem. I'll try my best to execute my ideas, so I hope all my readers will support me. Have fun reading! Also, feel free to ask questions in the comments. You can also join the Discord server.

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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Commented

    Bro fcked his mom >.<

    They both had cute and chubby cheeks; their hands were small and soft, and the colors of their eyes kept reminding her of the stranger she couldn't exactly recall.
    Rebirth Of The Serpent Master
    Fantasy · Jeri_
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Commented

    ... feels forced. Unless the king and higher department were also against this dude and needed an excuse to off him.

    Accused of trying to poison his youngest daughter, Barbara, and trying to sacrifice her to the snakes, Karyan was arrested by the great court and sentenced to death.
    Rebirth Of The Serpent Master
    Fantasy · Jeri_
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich4mth
    Replied to Joker_Joke

    best reading comprehension fr

    The voice of his deceased maid, Mu Xue, someone who died to save him and asked nothing in return.
    Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix
    Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
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  • Mr_Ostrich
    Mr_Ostrich5mth
    Replied to MDN_

    "oh god, look at this giy with cuckold fetish." Some tard chuckles."Yeah so cringe." Another joins.The girl who is into yuri hides her true feelings and nods, "Yes, should be stoned to hell. Such a misplaced bad trash existence. it's so pitiable.""such a loser fr."

    Supreme Villain: Help! Yandere Heroines Keep Stalking Me!
    Urban · Lord_Raven
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