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MC can't scheme. dropped this at like chapter 35 or something . after he made a kobold a neodemon it made the whole race feel cheap. handing it to anyone who he meets. maybe more internal dialogues about him using them and his safety measures would have helped to make him look more scheming but it was bland. I dont' understand why he wanted to upgrade the bloodline of his subordinates so much when their bloodlines are like second rank or something. just below primordial bloodlines which should be plenty of you consider they are already neodemons. suppress and control. should have gave them bloodlines that'd exhaust their potential so that when he no longer needs them he can easily discard nor will they be able to fight back
wholesome to see readers standing up for an author. the commenter still didn't give reason on why they didn't enjoy this. bot reviews? people here don't seem like bots. bad FML? might be true but not enough to give the story a 1 star review. misleading tags? debatable but a villain is someone who doesn't just kill or stands opposite to the hero's views. there are "mirror antagonists" who share the same views as the hero but have different ways of going about their goals. as long as the author paints 2 sides black and white and makes a character stand on the "dark" path then they are a villain. just like broken villains or villains who were simply minding their own stuff before getting disturbed. it's not a matter of right or wrong. there is no philosophical debate. it's about how the author feels.
peak writing. perfect down to the minute detail. Imma ass-kiss this with no shame because it deserves it. perfect character development, plot, world building, plot, everything!!! It deserves to be at number 1. the best newly released webnovel. would put it in my top 5 along RI. Good work author
OP but not too OP. Well I havent seen what anyone else in this world is capable of
I like this. giving more exposition to the world building also. we will understand the world from how originally it was to what the MC would make of it. was thinking of quitting the story but because of the creative writing behind it I want to see more.
beautiful first chapter. I like the creativeness with the MC's isekai. especially the test to help him remember the details of the novel. makes more sense then the MC remembering everything from the get go
This is plagiarized. oddly similar to ages of adepts. not just the tropes but all the events and skills of the MC. heck the side characters. I can only hope that this is a fanfic, other work of the same author (unlikely/different pen name). I hope that this story develops in a total different way compared to the original (age of adepts). it's like the author went to chatgpt and asked it to produce something similar .
this would be nice comedy if it didn't take itself seriously. like the greatest estate designer. go with the humor and build the plot later on
you only mentioned that the test would be in a pocket dimension. I'll go back and reread to see if I missed that. again you have beautiful writing but it's just the way that you set the story. I think if you took 5 chaps to introduce everything before putting him into the dimension it would have cleared everything up while setting a lot of things for the future. the pocket dimension belonging to the academy owner we would have the mc in the future chapters studying on the academy owner to find any clues if the owner used any swords. at that time you introduce the lore of the story. how the academy owner suddenly disappeared. the purpose of the academy. hinting at greater danger lying ahead.
you only mentioned that the test would be in a pocket dimension. I'll go back and reread to see if I missed that. again you have beautiful writing but it's just the way that you set the story. I think if you took 5 chaps to introduce everything before putting him into the dimension it would have cleared everything up while setting a lot of things for the future. the pocket dimension belonging to the academy owner we would have the mc in the future chapters studying on the academy owner to find any clues if the owner used any swords. at that time you introduce the lore of the story. how the academy owner suddenly disappeared. the purpose of the academy. hinting at greater danger lying ahead.