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ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author10mth
2024-02-21 00:08

Following the tradition here at Webnovel, I'm giving my fic a perfect 5 stars. Just drop a review, and comment about your opinion on the chapters. Give constructive feedback. English isn't my first language, so if you spot any mistakes, do forgive me and leave a comment. If you have anything that you think can add value to the fic then leave a comment or a review about it. I hope you enjoy reading this Fanfiction.

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SkillsMasterAkurai
SkillsMasterAkuraiLv14

If the mc is going to have lots of op abilities what is the power scaling because what is the point of the story if he just win all the time?

ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

He doesn't have many overpowered abilities currently, except Gate of Babylon and Sha Naqba Imuru. As for Infinity which he got from Gojo, it is something I have added just for fun. It can be easily surpassed using space magic. Especially spells like Reality Slash and World Break can easily overcome infinity. I'm sure the Cube isn't going to be used as a weapon most of the time. As for the book of summoning, each summons has a price on it. So it won't be a summoning festival. The assistant is harmless most of the time, and will only aid him and not fight for him. As for the money, yes he is going to build an impenetrable fortress or guild with it. Build a strong character and have powerful NPCs, which is usually the story of most Overlord Fanfics. Contrary to most of them where they make their characters too broken. I will be gliding along the border. I'll make him strong, somethings may break the rules but I'll try to build the character in-game without breaking many rules and logic. As for the book of Omnipotence, that will be the end goal of this fic, you don't have to worry about it. Also, this may offend some people but Ainz/Momonga can beat Gojo. He only needs to use two spells to finish the match. First start with time stop, Gojo has no resistance towards time spells and nor does anyone from JJK have it, as far as I'm informed. (I've watched the anime and haven't read the manga) and finish the match with true death or reality slash to be sure, well in case he has infinity activated. There is no way he coming back alive from that. The only thing that can be considered as broken is GOB, which I agree is pretty broken. As for his third wish, he isn't given an instant power-up or infinite mana, but Exponential growth and his limits are removed. It will be long before they can prove themselves as a cheat. Also, he won't be having any of those with him, when he is on Earth or Yggdrasil. He will only get them after getting summoned to the New World. I'm just going to share my vision with you here, this might count as a spoiler so at your discretion: I wish to create his character similar to Dazai(without his suicidal side) / Vanitas combined with Klein Moretti or the Fool. Also, add a bit of role-playing from Shadow. Not much, but by taking bits of their characteristics and building a character. Don't worry the Mc is going to be the same as he was in these first two characters. Just imagining him using Infinity with GOB and other powers he acquires from Yggdrasil, sounded interesting to me. So what's your take on this, I already have an idea for how to continue this fic but it will interesting to listen to other people's opinions.

SkillsMasterAkurai:If the mc is going to have lots of op abilities what is the power scaling because what is the point of the story if he just win all the time?
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Also, he may end up travelling the whole Omniverse in search of the key to unlock the Book. Well, his powers can be considered very mediocre compared to some broken worlds.

SkillsMasterAkurai:If the mc is going to have lots of op abilities what is the power scaling because what is the point of the story if he just win all the time?
SkillsMasterAkurai
SkillsMasterAkuraiLv14

Okay now that you explained it like this sounds like a great story concept and mc concept and want to see it flourish with it’s god level talent. I am just scared man i’ve 10s of novel fall from grace because they bite of more than they can handle. I will trust you and see you make the story happen.

ChaoticVoid_24:He doesn't have many overpowered abilities currently, except Gate of Babylon and Sha Naqba Imuru. As for Infinity which he got from Gojo, it is something I have added just for fun. It can be easily surpassed using space magic. Especially spells like Reality Slash and World Break can easily overcome infinity. I'm sure the Cube isn't going to be used as a weapon most of the time. As for the book of summoning, each summons has a price on it. So it won't be a summoning festival. The assistant is harmless most of the time, and will only aid him and not fight for him. As for the money, yes he is going to build an impenetrable fortress or guild with it. Build a strong character and have powerful NPCs, which is usually the story of most Overlord Fanfics. Contrary to most of them where they make their characters too broken. I will be gliding along the border. I'll make him strong, somethings may break the rules but I'll try to build the character in-game without breaking many rules and logic. As for the book of Omnipotence, that will be the end goal of this fic, you don't have to worry about it. Also, this may offend some people but Ainz/Momonga can beat Gojo. He only needs to use two spells to finish the match. First start with time stop, Gojo has no resistance towards time spells and nor does anyone from JJK have it, as far as I'm informed. (I've watched the anime and haven't read the manga) and finish the match with true death or reality slash to be sure, well in case he has infinity activated. There is no way he coming back alive from that. The only thing that can be considered as broken is GOB, which I agree is pretty broken. As for his third wish, he isn't given an instant power-up or infinite mana, but Exponential growth and his limits are removed. It will be long before they can prove themselves as a cheat. Also, he won't be having any of those with him, when he is on Earth or Yggdrasil. He will only get them after getting summoned to the New World. I'm just going to share my vision with you here, this might count as a spoiler so at your discretion: I wish to create his character similar to Dazai(without his suicidal side) / Vanitas combined with Klein Moretti or the Fool. Also, add a bit of role-playing from Shadow. Not much, but by taking bits of their characteristics and building a character. Don't worry the Mc is going to be the same as he was in these first two characters. Just imagining him using Infinity with GOB and other powers he acquires from Yggdrasil, sounded interesting to me. So what's your take on this, I already have an idea for how to continue this fic but it will interesting to listen to other people's opinions.
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

ChaoticVoid_24:Also, he may end up travelling the whole Omniverse in search of the key to unlock the Book. Well, his powers can be considered very mediocre compared to some broken worlds.
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Haven't decided. I am trying for romance but with the way I'm taking the story it may be a bit difficult. But I'll try my best if I can develop a relationship naturally then I'll go with romance. I want the romance to be natural, and not forced. But I haven't decided on his romantic interest yet, so I will be depending on readers for that, but in case I can develop a more natural romance with someone else then I'll go for it. But readers will matter. Also, no harem, while he can have more than one relationship, he will marry or go out with only one person at a time. Though I doubt I'll have Mc be in many relationships, I'll just leave it for voting.

Romance_guy:Romance?
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

I just hope I can do it right, I haven't been in any romantic relationship myself, so the romance aspect might not be the best in this fic.

Romance_guy:Romance?
Zack_shinigami
Zack_shinigamiLv14

When will the next chapter be out? Not trying to rush ya bro just wondering

ChaoticVoid_24:I just hope I can do it right, I haven't been in any romantic relationship myself, so the romance aspect might not be the best in this fic.
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Possibly in the next 24 hours, I'll be uploading a single big chapter or two chapters at once. The work got delayed due to some unforeseen circumstances. While I was enjoying my life, my college decided that they couldn't leave me free. So they have taken it upon themselves to provide me with work and disrupt my schedule. To be honest it wasn't just because of my college, I just found a couple of good Fanfic I got interested in. It was a Mushoko Tensei and Beyblade Fanfic. Kiyotaka Ayanokoji reincarnated In Mushoko Tensei and Ryuga and L Drago's reincarnation in Beyblade Burst world. Both of them were interesting and I got busy and forgot about my own Fanfic. I still have work to do, but I have almost completed the chapter just give me a day and I'll upload it.

Zack_shinigami:When will the next chapter be out? Not trying to rush ya bro just wondering
Zack_shinigami
Zack_shinigamiLv14

Alright bro was just wonderthing thanks for answering man

ChaoticVoid_24:Possibly in the next 24 hours, I'll be uploading a single big chapter or two chapters at once. The work got delayed due to some unforeseen circumstances. While I was enjoying my life, my college decided that they couldn't leave me free. So they have taken it upon themselves to provide me with work and disrupt my schedule. To be honest it wasn't just because of my college, I just found a couple of good Fanfic I got interested in. It was a Mushoko Tensei and Beyblade Fanfic. Kiyotaka Ayanokoji reincarnated In Mushoko Tensei and Ryuga and L Drago's reincarnation in Beyblade Burst world. Both of them were interesting and I got busy and forgot about my own Fanfic. I still have work to do, but I have almost completed the chapter just give me a day and I'll upload it.
Zack_shinigami
Zack_shinigamiLv14

Also where did you find the mushoko tensei fanfic? the only one I ground only had 1 chapter

ChaoticVoid_24:Possibly in the next 24 hours, I'll be uploading a single big chapter or two chapters at once. The work got delayed due to some unforeseen circumstances. While I was enjoying my life, my college decided that they couldn't leave me free. So they have taken it upon themselves to provide me with work and disrupt my schedule. To be honest it wasn't just because of my college, I just found a couple of good Fanfic I got interested in. It was a Mushoko Tensei and Beyblade Fanfic. Kiyotaka Ayanokoji reincarnated In Mushoko Tensei and Ryuga and L Drago's reincarnation in Beyblade Burst world. Both of them were interesting and I got busy and forgot about my own Fanfic. I still have work to do, but I have almost completed the chapter just give me a day and I'll upload it.
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Jobless Reincarnation X COTE. The Fanfic is completed.

Zack_shinigami:Also where did you find the mushoko tensei fanfic? the only one I ground only had 1 chapter
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

Are you going to continue with the story

ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Yes, I have written most of the content for the next chapter and am close to finishing it. But I have tests now in my college and I have many assignments and projects due. I have tests starting tomorrow, so I won't be available for this week. You can expect the next chapter after a week.

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:Are you going to continue with the story
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

Thanks for wasting your precious time on this novel

ChaoticVoid_24:Yes, I have written most of the content for the next chapter and am close to finishing it. But I have tests now in my college and I have many assignments and projects due. I have tests starting tomorrow, so I won't be available for this week. You can expect the next chapter after a week.
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

So what is it? Do you like the story or hate it?

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:Thanks for wasting your precious time on this novel
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

Love it honestly I haven’t read a story this good in months

ChaoticVoid_24:So what is it? Do you like the story or hate it?
LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

hello, i haven't read it yet. so is there any romance or harem so far?

ChaoticVoid_24:So what is it? Do you like the story or hate it?
ChaoticVoid_24
ChaoticVoid_24Author

Romance-yes, it's in progress. But there is no harem.

LunaKindred:hello, i haven't read it yet. so is there any romance or harem so far?
Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv11

I am not going to write a review, however I’m going to point some problem with your story your story is very random and mash multiple universes together. I’m not saying that is bad But first you have to see the building blocks of the world itself for example, if you mash DC Universe with sword art online it will not mash that well because one of them in the narration of it story itself consider it as a real world the other it’s A gaming world, the story doesn’t happen in the real world story happened inside the game you cannot match them together. This problem also include in your novel second problem I know you said you are not an English speaker however I have to point out either way there is a problem in the translation. Some of it is very confusing. Third point. The character of the protagonist is actually very childish and annoying .

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