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Zack_shinigami12hCommentedCh 39 Chapter 39: Dungeon- Zack_shinigami12hCommented
Will he ever end up using a sword or maybe some baton/tomphas
**Swordsmanship:** Having skills from his past life as a hero, Kaelin practices swordsmanship as a hobby and excels in various types of swords. - Zack_shinigami12hCommentedCh 130 DIO vs Stars & Stripes
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He's now a high end reality bender like Scarlet witch
I'll explain next chapter as to how and why him gaining a copy of New Order and Combining it with The World: Over Heaven would elevate him from being a Demi-God to a Living God, but if you understand what New Order does and how Over Heaven can Overwrite Reality, combining those two is in a sense what weaker version of the Eyes of Heaven would have done for Dio if that makes sense, mind you this is just a summary and not the full explanation from next chapter. - Zack_shinigami18hCommentedCh 3 misunderstanding
- Zack_shinigami21hReplied to ChaosVoid_24Ch 20 20. Batman is Dead [Clan Dissolution - Yggdrasil & The Last Meeting]
- Zack_shinigami21hCommentedCh 20 20. Batman is Dead [Clan Dissolution - Yggdrasil & The Last Meeting]
- Zack_shinigami22hCommented
I think the Mc meeting Mirio would be pretty interesting cause there both up-front loud and friendly so I'd think they would be fast friends
How do you feel about introducing interactions between characters who may appear later in the manga? For instance, our very own Kaelin and the enigmatic Mirio could share a moment of intangible camaraderie as they navigate the complexities of corporeal defiance. It's like that awkward moment when you wave at someone, and they don't see you—except here, they really can't see you! - Zack_shinigami22hCommented
I think 2-3 being the best with 5 or 6 being a real max to how many harem members there can be that get a real personality without it feeling overwhelming personal choices for MHA would be Momo, toga, and either the frog girl the invisible girl cause she can learn to turn it off or the pink girl
Question for the Readers: "Esteemed connoisseurs of courtship and calamity, let's talk about the heart's labyrinth in our beloved novel. Do you dream of a love story as straightforward as a grocery list, with a single female lead who steals our protagonist's heart (and possibly his favorite sweater)? Or do you fancy a more, shall we say, 'crowded' love life, where our hero's heart is a bustling airport terminal with arrivals and departures at every chapter? - Zack_shinigami22hCommented
Keep doing it how you've been the slower pace is nice
In the chapter 'Kaelin's Closet Catastrophe,' we explore the depths of his wardrobe woes and the familial bonds that tie stronger than his shoelaces. So, dear readers, do you relish these pauses in pace, where life's tempo slows to the beat of a ballad, and characters become as real as the person next to you on the bus (hopefully with better personal space boundaries)? Or do you prefer the relentless rush, where each page turn is a sprint to the next plot twist? - Zack_shinigami1dCommented
keep it up man please don't drop
This book has been deleted. - Zack_shinigami1dReplied to PRINCEAETHER
It was good tho a little confusing at some points I think it would be best if you try to write in a more 3rd person perspective or at least make sure the reader knows who is talking cause I've noticed a lot of people's povs but we don't get told who's pov before they've done something at least that's how it feels to me
Ch 14 ”Just another day in the life of Kaelin Godfrey” - Zack_shinigami1dReplied to PRINCEAETHER
Yeah I mean they also have special gear that are also effected by your quirk it's what the blond guy who can go intangible had his costume made out of and what Momo and the invisible girl should have had there's made of.. But it's a good weakness, keep it up bro
Ch 14 ”Just another day in the life of Kaelin Godfrey” - Zack_shinigami1dReplied to Zack_shinigamiCh 14 ”Just another day in the life of Kaelin Godfrey”
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Toga, or Momo
-Who should be the pairing? I'm not too big on harems but I can try anything.- - Zack_shinigami2dCommentedCh 38 Chapter 38: Ainz Ooal Gown
- Zack_shinigami2dReplied to Zack_shinigamiCh 129 Fall of Japan Pt. 2