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Just a piece of advice change the synopsis each time I read something like this synopsis my interest go down make it more reasonable and less cringe.😬

Are you dropping this?

Yeah, I smell the bad news when he started to hold a sword that was larger than him

A whole month, I don’t see anything other than the introduction

Sorry, but I’m not the author if you want to speak with him you should click on his comment before writing your comment so the message goes to him instead of me

You can change the timetable for the update, so we will know exactly when we get a chapter instead of thinking that you dropped the novel.

Don’t worry mate, I didn’t get offended by your word but the bigger reason that I stopped reading your novel is why is he a villain you see in the arcane series there is no villain each person in the story has their own dream and goals and in the way they will make some mistake while they are thinking they are doing the right thing so in the whole story of arcane there is no single villain at all even Singed has the goal to save his daughter so each and every person in the story has their own goals they commit mistake here and there but they are not a villain for the sake of evil like the protagonist who is a villain for the sake of it no reason for his action or goal behind it and I feel that he is forced into the story instead of flowing with it .

I don’t care if he doesn’t like kids, but I care about what if he turned into a crazy murder maniac after a while since any novel that has either Satoru Gojo or Ryomen Sukuna template tend to turn the protagonist into a maniac killer and for what just because the protagonist look like Sukuna or Satoru or because he has the template which by the way, give him the same look and powers but doesn’t give him the personality of those people this is why I wrote that comment. It is not about him not liking kids it’s about him copy the same scenario that those novel did so it is just a reminder of the author to not go that route.

And the third thing I find weird is his father a powerful magical creature how the hell did he die on the hand of an enforcer which has neither magic or supernatural power Unlike his father and mother.

First: his name is way too similar to a nation that hunt his own clan and his backstory is a bit forced in general if you know the basic story of lol you will find it a bit off I wished if you remove the whole bloodline charade you can keep him as a wizard which by the way, if you look at lol story you will find them quite powerful so I’m not sure why you added the bloodline. second: why there is no character building I found this one of the biggest mistake in your novel the novel should start way before the start of the original arcane so the protagonist has time to build the relationship with the original cast and try invent his new equipment, and weapon and gathering material from the street instead of everything coming to his hand without any struggle and I found it surprising that he has the ability to create anything he want without learn anything about science and magic? Even echo didn’t create the z drive without the help of powder and the professor who is around 300 years old and who took echo under his wing and who know the technology inside out genius doesn’t equal omnipotent a genius is a person who found it easier to learn and invent.