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Language

The language in this page is different or in this chapter can you please fix it?

Brother, why is the first chapter in English and the rest in a different language?

The author says the protagonist is smart and has an AI, yet he acts like an idiot. That’s actually what makes me frustrated. The fact that all of the protagonist’s supposed intelligence amounts to this is ridiculous. He never thought about advancing his homeland. Just advancing technology would benefit his family, even if he personally doesn’t need it, but he throws it away like it’s nothing just because he discovered the wizard civilization. To be honest, it’s kind of idiotic. At the very least, he could have asked for extra support before leaving for the wizard world in return for his blueprints.

Okay, now I’m a bit confused. This guy has Ultimate Comprehension. How does that translate into doubling his chakra or improving his five senses? His talent should be called Talent Generation instead of Ultimate Comprehension.

Didn’t this guy have barely 100,000 credit even after his harvest of bodies

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Mate, you really need to work on your pacing and there is multiple logical hole based on the original story.

I can see that, but you can ask the AI to add an accent, choose the dialect or tone you want, and tell it to make the writing feel more human. That would solve the problem. I could also do that with my reviews, but honestly, I don’t care that much since it isn’t a story. Still, I can see your point. Most people are too lazy to actually write anything. They just give the AI the structure of the story and ask it to fill in the rest.